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Harry Potter Fan Role Play => Role Play Character Bios => Topic started by: drewskit on August 5, 2008, 02:21:28 AM

Title: My secend one you like it?
Post by: drewskit on August 5, 2008, 02:21:28 AM
Name: Tom Pales 
AGE:  15
Height 5'6
Appearance:  Handsom, black hair, combination of blue on one side and green on the other side of his eye color, white, always smiling.
RACE:  half-blood
Parents:  Nancy and Niles Pales
Personality: Awsome personality loves to joke around, a big rebel, loves causing mischefe, Loved to make people laugh.
Likes: joking and girls
Dislikes: Teachers
Power: able to shipshape in to any thing he pleases
History: Started to duel when 5 really good his parents left him in a orphanage they didnt like him, he had lots of friends because of personality and lots of lady friends because of his looks. He was excepted at Hogwarts on a friday, he had no money so dumbledor helped him and went to hogwarts.
Title: Re: My secend one you like it?
Post by: potter_fan122 on August 5, 2008, 02:27:54 AM
It could use a little more description, like what year he`s in.
Title: Re: My secend one you like it?
Post by: Alexis on August 5, 2008, 02:28:03 AM
Not bad...could be more descriptive but I like it
Title: Re: My secend one you like it?
Post by: drewskit on August 5, 2008, 02:36:45 AM
Thanks he is 15 so he is in his fifth year and I made him perfect because the fist one I made was a ex death eater and a werewolve plus hes a loner.
Title: Re: My secend one you like it?
Post by: potter_fan122 on August 5, 2008, 02:38:04 AM
muches better! just modify the form to have that info on it.
Title: Re: My secend one you like it?
Post by: drewskit on August 5, 2008, 02:39:52 AM
What do you mean? and I meant 4th year sorry.
Title: Re: My secend one you like it?
Post by: potter_fan122 on August 5, 2008, 05:23:26 AM
Go up to where you have the bio form and click modify, then add the extra info of there and re-post.
Title: Re: My secend one you like it?
Post by: drewskit on August 5, 2008, 10:32:00 AM
oh
Title: Re: My secend one you like it?
Post by: harrypotterfan:) on August 6, 2008, 04:54:27 PM
lol...great job slow one....joking
umm I just want to know what house you're in so I could either be your friend or your worst enemy....mwahahaha sorry really hyper o.O
btw good bio=]
Title: Re: My secend one you like it?
Post by: drewskit on August 7, 2008, 12:00:50 AM
Thank he is in Gryfindor this time
Title: Re: My secend one you like it?
Post by: potter_fan122 on August 8, 2008, 01:21:04 AM
yay
Title: Re: My secend one you like it?
Post by: drewskit on August 8, 2008, 07:24:03 AM
kOOL AH
Title: Re: My secend one you like it?
Post by: potter_fan122 on September 2, 2008, 03:53:32 AM
=] Stacey leave Niles for Tom!!! muhahahahaha!!!! no, j/k
Title: Re: My secend one you like it?
Post by: drewskit on September 2, 2008, 05:02:35 AM
lol
Title: Re: My secend one you like it?
Post by: potter_fan122 on September 2, 2008, 05:04:02 AM
don`t laf!!! shes goin out w/ both of `em.