Name: Haley Williams
AGE: 13
Height: 5" 11'
Appearance: Blond Hair,Blue eyes ,(that change with her mood),she is tall for her age and is a bit chubby.
RACE: Caucasian
Parents: Chris and Jess
Personality:friendly,smart,funny,caring and sometimes a bit cranky.
Likes: a boy in her Astronomy class,food,exercising,and to read
Dislikes:when somebody uses their magic for bad, and her older brother
Power:is learning to make fire levitate,(but isn't having a very good time with it),also she can levitate any light objects and is starting to learn to lift heavier objects,( like pitchers full of water).
History: has accidentally burnt her favorite picture while learning to levitate fire, has had a difficult time with her love life, and has been known to lose a couple friends because of her temper sometimes.
Slightly better, but try to add more sentences.