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Harry Potter Fan Fiction => Harry Potter Fan Fiction => Topic started by: DokkenSuite on April 28, 2002, 06:33:13 AM

Title: A story of my own
Post by: DokkenSuite on April 28, 2002, 06:33:13 AM
 When Harry was at the robe shope he saw a pale face boy and a girl with wings like a bird,a tail,body,and ears of a lion,and she talked and walked like a humen."Is that a little tight for your wings dear?"said a which helping her.
"A little.Owch!"
 The boy couldn't take his eyes off her."You know I like girls with bloned hair."
Harry was about to go talk to her when..."All done"
She walked by Harry and Harry notice she had green eyes like him,just not as green ."Sara,you got the money don't you?"she asked a girl who looked like her egcept her voise and she had blue eyes.
  A few months later on his way to the train he saw her agien.She looked as thought she didn't know were the train was eather.Harry asked Mrs.Wesley how to get to the train.After his new friend Ron came throw she did."She must have gotten the idea."thought Harry.
  When Harry got on the train she was sitting next to the window looking out it."Uh. hi"said Harry vary shyly.
"Hi"she replied."My name is Princess Cassie Lions".
"Princess of what?"
"The Planet Petty Gallifrey or Pluto in Earth terms.Humens only see our moon we descised it."
"Oh "said Harry sounding surprised."My name is Harry Potter"
"Nice to meet you Harry"All of a sudden Ron come in and asked if Harry Was The Harry.He showed him his scar.Ron exsplained that he thout his brothers were playing a trick on him."Who or what are you"he asked Cassie.
"I am The Pretty Gallifreyian Princess Cassie Lions"she said angerly."Oh"He replaied.
 They arived at Hogwarts with onther friend.Hermine Granger.Harry,Ron,and Hermine were soted into Griffindor.The pale boy whose name was Malfoy was in Slytherin.As he walked by he pulled Cassie's tail playfully.Cassie was the last."Oh let's see here"said a voise in her ear."You are brave.You have lion blood in you.You have a dangerus enemy named scar.I beleve you shall be In,GRIFFINDOR."she walked by Malfoy who pulled her tail agein and sat by Harry,Ron,and Hermine.
 *Let me know if it's good and i will continue.*      
Title: Re:A story of my own
Post by: *~*Hermione*~* on April 28, 2002, 10:12:22 AM
It is really good!! ;D
Title: Re:A story of my own
Post by: .:~*Shuiliya*~:. on April 29, 2002, 03:36:05 AM
It's cute and very different/original.  But it seems to be going a bit fast... otherwise, cool, and keep going!
Is this your first ff or what?
Title: Re:A story of my own
Post by: DokkenSuite on May 5, 2002, 12:44:09 PM
yes it's my first.I type some mre tommrrow I don't have long.
Title: Re:A story of my own
Post by: .:~*Shuiliya*~:. on May 6, 2002, 02:23:29 AM
Alrighty tighty!  
This is really good for your first!  My first one sucked! lol
Title: Re:A story of my own
Post by: DokkenSuite on May 10, 2002, 12:25:30 PM
One of these days I'll put more I don't have long now.Your's was good Shui.
Title: Re:A story of my own
Post by: DokkenSuite on May 23, 2002, 12:14:15 PM
If I have more time there will be more.
Title: Re:A story of my own
Post by: .:~*Shuiliya*~:. on May 26, 2002, 01:19:54 PM
okay.
Title: Re:A story of my own
Post by: DokkenSuite on May 27, 2002, 11:58:29 AM
"Who's that wierd teachur sitting by Qurill?"Harry asked.
  "That's Snape."Said Ron"I heard he only favoers the Slytherines."
 After what seemed 10 mins. it time for bed.Cassie slept next to Hermine's bed.She was ready for the first day.
   When Cassie woke up,she was the only up.She knew her hair would be a problem so she whent to deal with it.She saw that there was some one waching her.Out of the blue...SWISH!She flung around with a sword in her hands.She looked up and Fred and Goegre were looking very stupiedfyed."Sorry you scared me."she told them.
 "Were did you get that",asked one of them."What's that on it?"
 "It's a snake and I got it from mom.I know what your going to ask.Dumbledor knows it  can't be used by enybody else.It' called the Serpit.And it's magical.Oops said to much."she said and went to the Great Hall.
 Harry,Ron,and Hermine all looked very tierd.They deffently weren't ready.All the Slytherines and Gryffendors went down in the dark and creepy dungens.As they entered Snape's there was a lot of chattering teeth.
 They  started  with a speech then rollcall."Lions,Malfoy,Potter...."he stopped and got up.
 "Lions and Potter our 2 new celberties."He asked some difficult qustions."I know all the anserwers,Sir,"said Cassie bravely."The first, a very power sleeping potion that erned the name The Sleeping Drought or something like that.The second,in a goat's stumuch.It cures most posins.Finlly,no difference they'er the same."Snape looked at her verey funny almost inpressed.
 "I see you been studying 3 points to Gryffindor.Your the first one I did that to.Be warned it might be the last."
     
Title: Re:A story of my own
Post by: hpcoolest5 on June 23, 2002, 01:17:58 PM
 :D This is really good, BHC! ;D
Title: Re:A story of my own
Post by: DokkenSuite on July 15, 2002, 01:00:34 PM
When I have more time I will add more.
Title: Re:A story of my own
Post by: emily824 on July 15, 2002, 10:59:35 PM
i love it! very creative~  :)
Title: Re:A story of my own
Post by: DokkenSuite on July 25, 2002, 01:36:11 PM
Tanx.
Title: Re:A story of my own
Post by: emily824 on July 26, 2002, 12:28:19 AM
what's ur wish BHC? and why do u have to be rich to get it?
Title: Re:A story of my own
Post by: DokkenSuite on August 14, 2002, 03:10:18 PM
It involves a sertin person,sertin place, and other personal details.
Title: Re:A story of my own
Post by: DokkenSuite on August 14, 2002, 03:36:58 PM
 Before eny one know it,it was time for lunch.Cassie and Hermione earned 30 points each from the first classes.
 "Cassie,hey,Cassie."It was Ron's older brouther Percey," I heard you got 3 points in Potions for gryffendor.How?None ever earns points from that-"
"Percey!I thought you knew better",Cassie snaped."You'er a Prefect you'er sopsed to stop that,not inforce it."
"Sorry.Any way, how did you do?"
"I just read the books for potions,that's all."Percey couldn't beleve it.She could tell he didn't.
"Hermione,what's our next class?I lost my list."
   They all went down to the D.A.D.A. classroom.It was really boreing.Nothing but gient lizards.Harry was setting net to her.She turned her head sideways to read his wach.'1:30 and not all is well',she thought.
 After what  seemed days everyone was allowed to go out for fresh air."Can't wait for flying lessons on Wendsday.Can you?",Cassie asked.
"I'm really exiced.",Ron said."Fred says it's hard."
"Ron,let me ask you something.Do you always beleve Fred and George.They said the sorting would hert,you asked if was true Harry was on the train becuase you thought it was a rumer ,and they are praticel jokers."
"She's got you there,Ron"Harry replied.
"I don't see the fuss over flying.Besides, I hate to say it, they'er right.You could fall off the broom,hit a wall take a bad dive,and much much more." Hermione said.
"She's basicly tell us to wear biking gear."Cassie whispered to Harry and Ron.They stared laughting then...."What's  biking gear?"Ron  asked.
"It's used for protecting your self  on bikes."
"What are bikes?"  
 
Title: Re:A story of my own
Post by: DokkenSuite on August 21, 2002, 09:58:17 AM
Noone wants to read it.
Title: Re:A story of my own
Post by: DokkenSuite on August 22, 2002, 08:49:22 AM
 There is A FUNNY part.PEOPLE READ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: Re:A story of my own
Post by: Lily_Evans on August 23, 2002, 08:32:49 AM
Very Unique :) :) :)
Title: Re:A story of my own
Post by: DokkenSuite on August 31, 2002, 01:19:49 PM
Someone posted! YAHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!
Title: Re:A story of my own
Post by: DokkenSuite on September 12, 2002, 12:25:05 PM
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Title: Re:A story of my own
Post by: DokkenSuite on September 12, 2002, 12:31:26 PM
I felt like doing that.
Title: Re:A story of my own
Post by: DokkenSuite on October 15, 2002, 07:12:41 AM
 "Bikes are a muggle version of brooms, except they have wheels,"Hermione said as she walked away.
 After a boring Tuesday, it was Wensday.The Gryffindors and Slytherines walked out to the field where two rows of broomsticks lay.
 "Welcome to your first flying lesson.Stick your right hand over your broom and say 'Up',"Maduem Hooch told the students.
 Everyone did as the were told.Harry's and Cassie's were the only two that jumped up on the first try.
Ron's must've gotten mad or something 'cuz it hit him in the head.Cassie and Harry started to laugh.
 "Shut up you two,"He yelled at them.
 "Now mount your brooms.On my whisel you will kick up into the air, then head back down,"Maduem Hooch instructed"One....Two.....Three"
 Neville jumped as the whisle was sounded.He lost controll of his broom and started shaking vilontly.He flew to high in the air for anyone to grab him.
 "Cassie, try to get him.You can fly."Harry said farly quikly.
 "I can't!My wings are to tathered up!"She replied.
 Neville was now headed strait at a wall.He hit it and fell on the ground.Maduem Hooch went over to  check on him.
 "Oh look a broken wrist.All of you stay in the ground while I take Mr.Longbuttom to the Hospital Wing.If I see one broom in the air,the one riding it will be exspelled faster than you can say Quddich."She said as they left.
 Malfoy picked up something off the ground.It was Neville's Remumberall."No wonder they call him Longbuttom.I might put this somewhere for him to find. How about up a tree."
 "Give it here Malfoy."Harry said.
 Malfoy jumped on his broom and took off."Sacered Potter come and get it.What about you Lovley?Are you like Potter?"Malfoy said to Cassie and Harry.
   They both jumped on thier brooms.Hermione came up to both of them."No you don't!Didn't you here Maduem Hooch?"
 They took off.Cassie went behind Malfoy while Harry staied in front of him.
 "Now give it here,"Harry yelled.
 "Hey, Malfoy,"Cassie said.
 Malfoy droped it.Cassie went and got it.Malfoy carched at her.
 "Harry catch."She threw it to him as Malfoy hit her.It look as it was the end for it...when Harry cought it!
 "All right!"Cassie shouted.
 They landed on the ground where the cheering cround waited.
 "Miss.Lions,Mr.Potter.Come with me." It was Professor McGonagall.      
  *GULP*
Title: Re:A story of my own
Post by: DokkenSuite on October 24, 2002, 12:30:17 PM
[size=100]POST PEOPLE!!!!!!!!!!!![/size] >:(
Title: Re:A story of my own
Post by: DokkenSuite on November 29, 2002, 05:49:43 AM
So what was your favorite part? ??? ??? ???



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Title: Re:A story of my own
Post by: DokkenSuite on December 29, 2002, 07:32:03 AM
Why won't anyone post?  You're making sad. :bigcry: :thumbsdown: :'( :( >:( :-\
Title: Re:A story of my own
Post by: Kiara Johnson on July 9, 2003, 04:54:58 PM
Bump!!
Title: Re:A story of my own
Post by: DokkenSuite on July 9, 2003, 05:04:34 PM
What?
Title: Re:A story of my own
Post by: Kiara Johnson on July 9, 2003, 06:03:06 PM
means to please continue....lol