I started a new ff! Whoo-hoo! I should be doing my hmwk... but this came in mind! Yes, this plot has been done before, but it hasn't here, so I'm posting it! I hope you like!
HARRY POTTER AND THE RETURN OF HERMIONE'S TIME TURNER
Hermione was walking up the staircase to her next class. This was her last year at Hogwarts, and she wanted to take all the classes she could once again. She absentmindedly fingered the time-turner chain that dangled around her neck, and hummed an unknown tune silently to herself.
"Hermione!" Ron called from the bottom of the stairs. Hermione turned abruptly, and her book bag slipped out of her hands. As a sort of instinct, she made a grab for the bag and lost her footing. She fell forward, and started tumbling down the stairs. Ron's eyes became wide and the blood drained from his face.
"HERMIONE!" He yelled. He ran up the stairs making an attempt to catch the rag doll falling down. His attempts weren't very good though, because he fell down, too, once he got a hold of her and they were both plummeting down the steps.
Once the two stopped at the bottom of the stairs, they instantly felt themselves being pulled and dragged backwards, the world a blur as day became night and night became day, winter became fall and fall became summer. This went on for awhile, but both Ron and Hermione were soon unconscious, so they didn't know when the pulling stopped.
Faint noises could be heard, and Hermione opened her eyes slowly and lifted her head. Everything was smeared and blurry, but she could make out a face. There were four boys. All about 17 and in Hogwarts robes with scarves of scarlet and gold. But the one boy Hermione noticed the most had jet-black hair, was tall, and wore glasses.
"H-Harry?" She said faintly and she passed out again.
Okay! Thats all I have so far! Do you want more? Review please!
Dont give it up!!! Cuz thats wat I'm gonna do if I dont get any ideas 4 anoder section. :(
JSYK(just so ya know)= In 1980, Harry Potter was born. In 1991, Harry Potter was accepted to Hogwarts, School of Witch Craft and Wizardry. In 1997, Harry Potter would be in his final, last year as a Student at Hogwarts. Thats the way the books were set up.
Now here's the next bit of the story!
The next time Hermione woke up, she was in a different place. It looked like the infirmary! She sat up on the bed she laid in, to quickly find out that that hurt, and laid back down again groaning.
A very, very young looking Madam Pomfrey bustled into the room from the office a minute later. Hermione, not being able to move her head, follows Madam Pomfrey with her eyes.
"Ah, I see you are awake!" Pomfrey smiled. Hermione just moaned in response. "So what happen here?"
Hermione racked her brains to try to remember what had happened... Ah, yes! She was heading for class when Ron called her. Next thing she know what that she was falling. Hermione gasped and put her had to her chest, finding that the time-turner was gone! It must've slipped off her next whilst she was falling! But then...
"What year is it?" Hermione asked quickly.
"Pomfrey looked at her dumb-foundedly and said, "My dear, it is 1977."
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"What!?" Hermione shrieked. Pomfrey was taken aback by this unknown child's sudden outburst. "This cannot be happening! This can NOT be happening!" She rambled, panicking.
"Dear, calm down! I need you to drink this! It will make your cuts and bruises heal, and this drink," she pointed to a second drink, "will mend your broken bones." The nurse gave the frantic girl the drinks and Hermione disdainfully drank them, making a face.
"Now try to go back to sleep." Pomfrey informed. "I will send Dumbledore (he is the Headmaster here at Hogwarts) up soon was you are feeling better." Madam Pomfrey got up and went back to her office.
Hermione was still trying to think of the possibilities of going back in time 20 years with such a simple time turner. Maybe it was an improved model. Thought Hermione.
All of a sudden, she felt extremely tired. Hermione turned to her side and saw a very battered looking Ron. I must look two times as worse considering I fell further...
Soon after, Hermione was knocked into a deep, dreamless sleep.
I got a title for it.Harry Potter and Hermine's Time Turner Returns .Tell me if you like it.I like the story.
Thank you! I do like that! Better than mine! I'll change it once I post this.............
I love the fanfic Shui!! Keep writing!!!!
I'll post some up asap. I still have to write the next bit... heehee
AAAAAAAAAAAHHHHH!!!!! SHUI!!!!! I WANT MORE MORE MOOOOORE!!!!
Hurry up with the next parts!!!!! This good! :D Heehee! Sirius is young and cute!
*runs around squealing and giggling*
*slaps forehead* Oh dear God...
*does nerdy Voldie laugh* ;D ;D ;D
Hurry up!
Okay okay okay! I'll write summore tonight!
Black more of kid now the PoAzb.
Bad News guys. The notebook that I write my stories in... well... I lost it. I'm sorry!
Nevermind! I found it!
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The next time that Hermione woke up, the sun was shining brightly through the window, and birds were chirping happily. Hermione rubbed the sleep from her eyes and tries to get them to focus.
"Good morning!" Someone said abruptly next to her. Hermione squeaked a little and jumped almost two inches.
"Professor Dumbledore!" She said.
"That I am. And who might you be?" Dumbledore asked.
"Is there something wrong, Professor? You know perfectly well who I..." Hermione stopped talking as yesterdays events came rushing back to her memory. "My name is Hermione Granger and I-"
Dumbledore cut in "-I don't want an explanation yet. Once the boy over there wakes up, then we can talk." He smiled.
"His name is Ron Weasley," Hermione huffed and sat back in her bed.
About fifteen minutes later, Ron woke up and stared blankly at his surroundings. He slowly turned towards Hermione.
"What happened?" He asked, scratching his head.
"That is just what your friend here is about to tell me." Dumbledore said, eyes twinkling.
"Ron, we went back in time while falling down the stairs... I had on my time turner. It's now 1977 instead of 1997, and we don't have a way to get back to our time because I lost the time turner during our... fall."
"I see..." Dumbledore scratched his beard-covered chin.
"No-frickin'-way!" Ron stared at Hermione in disbelief. "No way! We went back in time-" Ron stopped and counted on his fingers "-twenty years?! That's bloody insane!" Ron just kept on rambling and hollering with plenty of 'now ways!'s in it.
The twinkle in Dumbledore's blue eyes grew even brighter. Hermione could see the gears turning in his head. After awhile, he finally said, "Well, since Poppy will not allow me to take you to my office (impossible, that woman) I'll have to talk with you here.
"Since you traveled back in time to where you weren't even born yet, that may cause some troubles if you are to keep your real names. I would like you to make up new names using the letters that are already in your names." Dumbledore took out two pieces of parchment, two quills, and one ink well from a side drawer. "Be thinking of ways while I'm talking to you.
"Now, first thing: I don't want you going around telling these people of their futures; what they will become, who they will marry, etc. Do not tell anyone the real reason to why you are here. When the time comes to introduce you to the school at dinner tonight-"
Pomfrey interrupted him "-No, it will not be tonight. They are in no condition to be even leaving these beds until tomorrow."
"Poppy," Dumbledore turned to face her, "They are perfectly fine at the moment." Pomfrey looked at him harshly then looked at Hermione and Ron who were thinking of new names for themselves.
With pursed lips she replied, "Fine." Dumbledore smiled really big and looked back at Hermione and Ron and continued.
"Tonight at dinner I will introduce you as exchange students from an unnamed school from.... one of The Isles. Just follow my story and try to make up things if people start asking you questions." Dumbledore let out a breath of air and clasped his hands together.
"Now, Ron, what name have you chosen?" he asked.
Ron replied, reading off his paper, "Ned Asley..." and Hermione just burst out laughing.
"N-Ned?!-" She wiped a tear from her eye "-Ned Asley? What kind of a name is that?"
Ron looked down and said in a small voice, "I rather liked it..."
"Okay, Hermione, what's your new name?" Dumbledore asked.
"Hermione sat up straight and puffed out her chest proudly, chin high, and said, "Mia Rame."
"Rame? That's worse than Asley!" Ron said, angry. Hermione just shrugged.
"Okay, Ned, Mia! You are now in the care of Poppy until tonight where you will be sorted-"
"-But we were already sorted." Ron said.
"Yes, of course, but to be safe, we will resort you in public, so the students don't get suspicious. The staff will be informed about this of course. Now I must be off to a meeting. Good day!" Dumbledore stood and left the room.
Hermione turned to Ron and Ron said looking at the door, "Well Mia. This is going to be one heck of a day!" Then he turned to her an smiled.
Can't wait see what happend next. Maybe Hermione will be in Ravenclaw! ;D
hmmm maybe I should take that into consideration.... but I always thought that she had more of a darker evil side to her that no one knows about.... O.o
*gives Shui an emotionless stare*
You are NOT going to put her in Slytherin so she can be with a younger Snape!
Enough with your evil couples! *waves fist around and marches around the room*
No more! No more! ;D *runs and hides behind the younger and cuter Sirius Black* :-*
Darn! Caught! J/k. That idea hadn't crossed my mind.... >:}
*hands on hips* And what if I do put them together? Would all of you freak and not read this anymore? Is it okay if they're just friends, then?
*stops and thinks *putting hand on chin -like she has a beard-*
Well, friends are okay, I guess. But If you WERE going to put them together, make it a different version! Then post it at ff.net and all you and your little Snapey/'Mione fans can go wild! ;) Cuz this is a good fan fiction! ^_^
And please update soon!!!
I will, I will.... once I actually write more. ^_^;;
Lol! Then let me hear that pencil sharpener! ;)
Heehee. Well, actually, I use a pen :D
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Hey, ShuiBee! Great story! I felt like I should read yours after you've been reading mine....Please post more! It's really interesting so far! :)
Oh! Thanx Cam! I appreciate it!
That night in the Great Hall, Sirius, James, and Remus were all talking about Quidditch when Dumbledore called attention to the school body. Everyone looked at Dumbledore and the two seventeen-year olds on each of his sides.
"Everyone, settle down! I have an announcement to make! We have two new exchange students. They will be entering their seventh year here at Hogwarts. Their names are-" he pointed to Hermione "-Mia Rame and-" he pointed to Ron "-Ned Asley. They have yet to be sorted, so we will do that soon.
"Miss Rame and Mr. Asley are from Northern England, from a school that remains a mystery from any person not-"
Sirius tuned out Dumbledore and whispered to James, "That Mia girl's pretty cute." James just glared back at him.
"-And now to the Sorting! Mr. Asley, please sit on the stool over there and place the hat on top of your head."
"Where else would he put it?" Sirius again. James punched Sirius on the shoulder, and Sirius grabbed it.
"Ow!"
Ron walked over to the stool feeling confident, considering that he knew what house he would be in. He sat on the three-legged stool, and placed the moldy old hat on his red head.
".... Ahhh.... I see.... A time traveler.... You have already been sorted into Gryffindor.... Why change? So then you'll still be....
"GRYFFINDOR!" Said the hat. There wasn't as much clapping and cheering as the actual Sorting Ceremony, but there was still quite a bit. Ron took off the hat, stood, set the hat back down on the stool, and walked over to the oh-so-common Gryffindor table. Once he found an empty seat, he sat down and turned to watch Hermione.
"Miss Rame, if you would please," Dumbledor gestured to the stool. Hermione left Dumbledore's side and also walked to the stool.
Once the hat was on her head, a voice flew in to talk – more so ramble – to her.
"Yet another from the future? Merlin! Okay now, lets take a look.... You were also a Gryffindor and the smartest of your year.... Head Girl.... Hmmm.... Since I didn't change the boy's placement, I shan't yours either....
"GRYFFINDOR!" Yelled the hat. Hermione let go of the breath she didn't know she was holding; she got a little scared there for a second. She walked to the Gryffindor table, and found the closest seat she could next to Ron, which just happened to be right next to Sirius.
"Hey there. I'm Sirius Black," said, well, Sirius! And stuck out his hand while giving a dreamy, award winning smile that made Hermione all melty and giggly.
Giggle, "H-hi," giggle, "I'm-I'm Her... Mia Rame." Blush. Merlin! Thought Hermione, Sirius looks so... good without all those years of Azkaban on him!
"Yeah, I know that much." Another smile, and another giggle from Hermione. What is going on? I've never been like this before!
"Sirius, would you quit it? You're gonna make this poor, gorgeous girl giggle to death!" Remus.
"Moony, you're just jealous 'coz I gotta talk to her first." Remus rolled his eyes.
"By the way, Mia, this is Remus Lupin." Remus gave a tired smile, and Hermione gave a small wave. A boy that could be an exact replica of Harry – save the brown eyes and no scar – waved at her and said, "I'm James Potter, and this is my beloved Lily Evans, soon to be Mrs. Potter." Lily smiled, and they both showed the gold bands on their ring fingers. There was some gagging in the background.
"James, Lily, you need to stop all that fluffiness! It's making poor ol' Remus and me gag to death!"
"Shut up, Black." And they all smiled. Hermione was about to burst into tears right there. They all looked so happy! They had no idea that two of them will die, another will start to rot in wizard jail, and the last will live all alone... it was too much to handle for Hermione, knowing their future's. But she hid all that emotion from her face as quickly as possible.
"Okay everyone!" Dumbledore said and everyone took his or her seats again, "let the feast begin!" And the golden platters were filled with delicious, mouth-watering food.
"Has the best ruddy food, Hogwarts does. The house-elves do the greatest job!" Sirius said while piling his plate high with everything. Hermione smiled in spite of herself, remembering her 'SPEW' days. Hermione really didn't eat anything. She hadn't really been hungry since they'd arrived here.
Later that night, Lily showed Hermione to the seventh year girl's dormitories.
"Hey guys, this is Mia," said Lily. There was a little chorus of 'heys' and 'hellos'.
"This is Sylvia Grain," Lily pointed to a short, chunky girl with short, ringletted blonde hair and dull green eyes. "That over there is Melanie Grift," she was a lanky girl reading 'Witch Weekly'. She had auburn hair and violet eyes. "And over there are Jacqueline and Andrea Mecat." They were twins, but one was noticeably taller than the other. They had long brown hair and blue eyes. Lily clapped her hands together. "Okay! Well, I must be off to bed. You guys should too. We still have school tomorrow, you know. Good night!" And she left in a turn of her heal, and swish of her hair.
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I haven't the slightest clue how Lily acts.... and if you've noticed, Pettigrew wasn't there at all... hopefully he went out and got killed, but he's still alive in the future so no such luck >:( I think I'll introduce him later, tho I don't really wanna at all *sigh*
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Cool! but it's pretty sad that Hermione wasn't been sorted in to Ravenclaw after all- or should I say: Mia.
J/K I also hope Harry's there too, so he could be with his mom and dad- sniff
Nope, Harry's not gonna be there.... :(
That was great! I really like it! Please post more. :D
*Had a brainwave* I know! Tell Sirius don't let wormtail be the secret-keeper! Harry won't be famos, but he get his parents!
like i may have said before....great story! ;)
Thank you! But I don't seem to have the time to write anymore... I'll try to write some every night b4 I go to bed... but posts may come like... a week apart. Jsyk
Okay! Here's some more! Savor it! The next bit might not be up for awhile! ;D
There was an evil cackle. There stood V.oldemort in front of Harry, wand raised right between Harry's eyes. Harry didn't show any emotion. Only his green eyes dazzling brilliantly.
"Now you die Potter," he said, saying Harry's last name as though it was a foul taste on his tongue. V.oldemort was glowing with triumph, but Harry just smiled at him. This threw V.oldemort off a little bit, but only for a small while.
"If you dare fight back Potter, your death will be even more painful."
After about a minute's pause, V.oldemort yelled, "CRUCIO!" His hatred toward Harry made the curse a hundred times more powerful. Harry dropped to the floor in the fetal position, writhing in pain. Hot white sparks and flames shot through his body. As soon as the curse had come, it had also gone, but it had felt like an eternity. Harry couldn't move, he couldn't think. He couldn't even see! There was only darkness around him. Then, the words of death were spoken.
"AVADA KEDAVRA!" V.oldemort spit out loudly. Harry stopped moving, stopped breathing. Harry Potter, the Boy Who Lived, was now dead under the feat of the Dark Lord.
Then, someone walked out of the shadows. Of course, his face was covered by a hooded cloak and mask.
"My Lord, what shall I do with Potter's body?" A familiar, smooth, silky voice asked.
"Severus, I will throw him in the fire and watch him burn." They both laughed at the lifeless Harry, and threw him in the fire, the glow of which made V.oldemort look green-orange, and even scarier then before. A twisted smile played across his lips...
Hermione woke up drenched in sweat, limbs trembling violently, stomach churning, and breathing ragged. Her eyes were wide open and alert, but all she could see was his green eyes.
"It was just a dream, Hermione, just a dream!" She said to herself. Harry is still in the future, safe and sound with Dumbledore, she thought. Hermione was still worried about Harry, despite her failing attempts to make things seem better. She had felt somewhat responsible for what happened to Harry, and Ron too. She was always the brains of each operation. So now that she wasn't around to help Harry, she couldn't help but feel terrified for him.
It was still dark outside. Hermione checked the side clock and it read three-o-seven. Even though it was quite a ways until the sun would rise, Hermione couldn't go back to sleep, so she got out of bed and went to the bathrooms (that no one seems to no where, but are there nonetheless), and took a shower.
Later that morning, Hermione walked down the dormitory stairs to find Sirius, James, Remus, Peter and Ron sitting around the fire laughing. At hearing her entrance, Ron turned to look at Hermione and smiled.
"Good morning, Mia."
"Good morning, Ned." She smiled back, and walked to Ron's seat. "What's up?" Sirius and James looked at each other questioningly at the phrase.
"James and them were telling me that they found us when we first came here!"
"Really?" Hermione asked, "how?"
James told them that they were out tending to some 'business' at night, and heard a thud, and saw the two of them lying on the ground unconscious. So they took them to Madam Pomfrey in the Hospital Wing.
Hermione's eyes got wide, "and she didn't get you into any trouble?" She asked incredulously.
"Nope! That was the best part!" Sirius beamed. Hermione looked disapprovingly at them just as the bell for breakfast rang.
"All right! Time to eat!" Ron jumped out of his seat. They all walked down to the Great Hall talking and laughing some more.
Wow cool! Maybe u can let Sirius fall for Hermione, or should i say Mia? LoL Only if you want! LoL sorry....I like to laugh! LoL :D ;)
Did you hear my advise?! let Hermione-I mean Mia, what ever it is- tell Sirius don't let wormtail be the secret-keeper! Do you want James and Lily die? do you want Sirius in jail? And the dream does not make any sense! Snape didn't return to v.oldemort!
You can't change the future, it would mess up everything. If Harry had his parents, then maybe Ron and 'Mione wouldn't be friends with him. Harry would become conceited, and a spoiled brat. Everything would be different. Plus, Dumbledore told them not to reveal future stuff, and another plus, it would rack up suspicions. I can't do that.
You know what, MCS? I like your idea! Maybe I should make Sirius fall for 'Mione! :D I like that idea!
Severus is only in the dream because all the kids at school still think that he is a Death Eater, and in this time, he actually is one, so that probably set it off. But it's only a dream!!
Ok, Ok! But you can let Mia tell Sirius, and he wouldn't listen. Like that. Anyway, There is new update at Unexpected Ravenclaw victory. Please read and post!
cool. glad you like my idea. hope you post more soon. :D ;D
SHUIBEE POST MORE NOW!!!!!!!!!!! Pleeze. ::)
yeah. it's really good! :D
Allrighty. I'll post more tonight.... may take awhile tho.
Do any of you know a lot about potions?
Okay... this is probably getting really boring. Please tell me if it is!
Once at the Great Hall, Lily beckoned them into the six seats saved around her.
"Good morning, guys!" Lily beamed. She seemed to be the always-happy type, which was good cause it kept everyone else happy, too.
"'Mornin', Lily." Said James as he pecked her cheek and sat next to her. Hermione sat at her other side.
"How'd you sleep, Mia?" Lily asked.
"Pretty well, I guess," she replied.
"This seat taken?" asked Sirius, pulling out the chair by Hermione.
Hermione looked over her shoulder at Ron, and said, "ummm... no." She smiled and Sirius sat down. Soon after, breakfast began.
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The first class that day was Potions – with the Slytherins. Not a very good start of the day in Hermione's opinion. The walk down to the dungeons was pretty silent. The only thing heard was their footsteps. It was a bit nerve-racking, but soon enough they arrived at the Potions classroom and entered.
Sirius whispered in Hermione's ear, "Professor Edmund is the teacher, and he is the foulest person I've ever met. He favors the Slytherins. Definitely not a person to cross." He warned.
"Black! Girl! If you would kindly take a seat so I can start my class. Thank you." He snarled. Hermione was paying all her attention to Sirius that she didn't even notice everyone was sitting and watching them. Some Slytherins in the corner were snickering. She recognized a few of the faces. Sirius pulled Hermione to a desk in the very back of the classroom, and just as they situated, Professor Edmund barked, "that will be ten points from Gryffindor," Hermione and Sirius groaned, then he added, "make that twenty points. I do not tolerate insolence, is that clear, Girl?"
"Yesir." Then he started roll.
"Asley."
"Here."
"Black."
"Here."
And it droned on until she heard, "Malfoy." And she caught sight of the trademark Malfoy platinum blonde hair and steel blue eyes. Then it got to her name ("Rame." "Here."). Then there was "Snape." And Hermione turned toward the silky voice. Yup, she thought, still looks the same. The she thought of the teacher at the front of the class now lecturing about the effects and side effects of beetlejuice and what made it powerless, and so on. Occasionally he took off points from Gryffindor. Must be where Snape got his teaching style, Hermione thought. Then an hour later, the bell rang, and class ended. Everyone packed up and left for their next class.
That was great! Don't think it's boring, cuz I LOVE it! Please continue when you can! And, sorry, but I don't really know much about potions...that's my worst subject! Once again, GREAT STORY! ;D
Continue, continue, continue!!!!
You're going good so far! Don't give up now! ^o^
Heehee...Sirius and 'Mione...erm...Mai! HAA! (-kinda sounds like a dockey or Squidward)
Almost as bad as a Remus and 'Mione I ran into! o.O
I like Remus and 'Mione.... *cracks up* I like her having relationships with practically all her teachers + the Marauders! ;D
Sry, i'm still on di first page, but need to get off the computer now. great story! ;D It's, like, 12:00pm. Cya!
Cassie^_^ ;D
Please post more! I really like it! ;D
Alrighty.... I haven't even written any more yet.. hehe ^_^;;
:o :D ;DTHIS IS GREAT!!!!! Please keep going! Fantastic! ;D
That's okay...just try to write. I know it may seem hard to write at times, but just try. :)
Okay. Thanx!
;D :DMan! I had no idea u could write so well, Shui! This is so cool! :D ;D Like Cam said, don't rush a masterpiece! ;D
:o I write well?? :o
I'll most likely post some more this after noon (it's 9:30 now, I have plenty time to write today!).
;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;DU do write very well! ;D
Okay, I lied yesterday! I'll write today! ;D
Ty, Cassie.
;DEr.... u didn't post.... NVM. ;) ;D
lol nope! I lied again. I wrote the next bit today, but I'm gonna go ta bed soon, so I'll post it tomorrow... I promise!! but it's short..
wow Shui I had no idea you could write this good. This is awesome! I just have one criticism to make: If all wizards who went bad were in Slytherin, then why isn't Sirius in Slytherin? And that would put Pettigrew in Slytherin too. And seeing as how Lupin, Potter, Black, and Pettigrew were all friends, they'd most likely be in the same house: slytherin. Which would put Lily Potter in slytherin... am I reading too far into this?
What are you talking about? Sirius wasn't bad... none of the Marauders were 'sept Petegrew... but I bet he wasn't always bad. Lily was good.. When did I say all bad ppl are put into Slytherin? ???
OKay! Finally! Here's summore! Sorry it took so long, and sorry that it's so short. ;D Hope you like!
During the next few weeks nothing grand rolled by... just class and the Marauders and their tricks. But one evening at dinner, the teachers at the high table were all talking excitedly. At one point, Dumbledore stood up and called everyone's attention.
"Students! I have an announcement to make!" Dumbledore yelled over the chittering of the kids. Once it was quiet, he continued, "This year at Halloween, instead of just the usual Holiday Feast, we will have a costume ball afterwards." Dumbledore paused, letting the information sink into everyone's heads. Once it passed through, the students all began to talk again feverently, but in hushed tones.
"There will be more information about this on your Common Room bulletin board." As the old man sat back down, noise erupted from the hall. Girls were thinking out loud (very loud) what costume to wear, and saying things like 'This is gonna be sooo much fun!' and 'What a fabulous idea!' and other variations of that. Hermione just groaned. She had never really enjoyed the whole idea of 'Halloween' and had the same reluctance towards balls.
The last ball Hermione had gone to was the Yule Ball back in her 4th year. She had gone with Victor Krum, the Bulgarian Quidditch player. The thought of Victor brought back memories... that summer, she had gone to Bulgaria to stay with Victor for a couple of weeks, but in those few weeks, Hermione began to really like Victor. But when she told him, Victor laughed in her face and broke her little heart. He was so cruel to her after that...
Sirius nudged her in the side, interrupting her thoughts. Hermione turned to Sirius and the first thing she saw was a sly grin plastered on his face.
"Well, Mia, I know you don't have a date yet for the ball considering we just heard about it, so...." he trailed off.
"So what, Sirius?" Hermione played. She knew what he was going to say, but was gonna milk what she could out of it. Over the past month or so, 'Mia' and Sirius were becoming beat friends.
"So... do you wanna go with me?" Hermione gave him a flabbergasted look, and momentarily, Sirius looked worried that she would say no, but that was quickly hid by another sly smile.
"Well, Sirius, I don't really know.." She said very slowly. Sirius gave her puppy dog eyes and pouted his lower lip. He looked so pitiful! "Fine." She sighed and rolled her eyes. She was actually very happy that he asked her, but felt like messing with his head a bit. Throughout the rest of dinner, Hermione kept stealing side glanced at Sirius, and covered a small smile once in awhile.
;DThat's great!!!!! Please keep going! ;D
I'll try! ;D
thanx 4 lettin me hang wit you where you from. whats up with the purple elephant lol ???
'Tis not a problem. ;)
A purple elephant is something I give all newbies. I just can't keep all the ones I catch! lol ;D
hey shui!!!! update this ASAP!!!! I'm HOOKED! lol this is the coolest HP fan fic. Keep posting or I might start crying! :'(
*runs off crying*
"Only joking! I am Fred!"
-Fred Weasley
(lol)
Amy! calm down! I'll post more tonight. Please stop crying! :-\
Yay! More! ^_^ Do post this at ff.net, when it's back up! ^___^
MORE!!!!!! >:(
:D ;)
You really think I should?? ???
DEFINATELY!!!!! I go to ff.net all the time and those people on there would LOVE this story. And don't worry Shui, I wasn't really crying. But thanks for your concern! :)
The next few days, all everyone could seen to think about was the Costume Ball. There were costume catalogues scattered everywhere. Hermione was getting sick of everyone really fast. Exams were only in two and a half months! She was the only one studying, too! Hermione didn't know what she was going to go as yet. She hadn't given it any thought.
Lily was flipping noisily through one of those cursed catalogues.
"Lily, aren't you worried about your exams?" Asked Hermione.
"Mia, they're a ways away. We do need at least a little fun in our lives!" Lily threw the catalogue on Hermione's bed. "Look at page 34. There's a costume I think you should use. It'll look great on you."
Reluctantly, Hermione picked up the catalogue. She flipped to page 34 and her eyes widened. At the top of the page, there was a skimpy little bunny outfit.
"Are you out of your mind, Lily? All this is, is... a-a leotard!" Lily's brows furrowed and she walked over to Hermione's bed and sat next to her and looked at the page.
"Oh, no, Mia! I didn't mean that one! I wouldn't suggest that to anyone. It's this one down here." Lily pointed to a small picture in the very corner.
"A Medieval Maiden," read Hermione. "It's okay, but I don't think I'd look good in it."
"Oh come on, Mia! I know that if you don't chose a costume now, you'll forget to get one altogether."
"How could I forget with everyone talking about nothing but-"
"Please, Mia. I really do think you'd look good in it."
"Hermione heaved a defeated sigh and said, "fine."
"Yay! Now, let me show you what I'm going as." Lily turned a few pages, then held up the picture for Hermione to see. It was a Muggle faerie outfit.
"can I please study now, Lily?" Lily rolled her eyes and nodded while walking back to her chair.
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The Next day was classes. Hermione stayed up until she heard the clock strike four a.m. So, having only three hours of sleep, Hermione was very tired. In Transfiguration class, she actually fell asleep!
"Mia, what's wrong? You've never done that before! It's majorly against your ethics!" Ron had asked after class. "You got a detention and ten points off!"
"I got detention?" -yawn- "I wasn't paying attention to what Professor MeGonnal was saying..." Ron pulled Hermione to the side.
"First, Hermione, it's McGonagall, and second, I've been really worried about you lately. You've been acting weird ever since we got here."
"Ron, you don't need to be worried. I'm fine. I just stayed up a bit late studying."
"No, Hermione, why do you do this to yourself every year? It's not healthy! You're going to make yourself sick!" He whispered harshly.
"Ron..." the last bell rang and they both broke out into a run to their next class. Once they were about to split, Hermione finished, "Ron, we'll talk about this later.. bye!"
"Bye."
Neither of the two noticed that someone was near, listening to their conversation...
u can't keep us waiting like that!!!! :-\ i'm gonna go out of my mind!!!! :'(
I'm sorry! But hafta wait. More will be up tomorrow morning.
noooo! don't do it!!!!! :'(
omg! that's totally freaky! someone knows their identities now! oh noooo! lol ok...i'm calm! i'm glad u used my idea...the one with sirius and mia.....i'm a sucker for a bit of love...hee hee hee. and shui...how come i never got a purple elephant??? ???
I didn't?!?!? I'm so sorry! At one period time I forgot to give them to newbies! I'm so sorry! *hands her a purple elephant* Do you need a favor or something? :-\
Lol. :D
Wow Shui! That was grrrrrr-eat! (hehe, Tony the Tiger moment... ^^; ) Please hurry up with the next part!!!! ^__^!!! I need more!! :D :D :D
Lol! Geez u guys are pushy and impacient! hee Love ya all!
"You can't rush creativity"
--G. G. Gostfern (lol)
Heehee Tony the Tiger is my HERO!!
*runs off singing: And they say that a Hero can save us! I'm not gonna stand here and wait! I'll hold on to the wings of the eagles and watch as we all fly away!* *clears throat and looks both ways* *pulls out secret story notebook ("Het thats secret!") and writes more*
Heehee! Cool! I have my own quote! :D ;D
Yes! Get to writing! ;D :)
;DI've loved that song ever since I heard it on the ads for Spiderman the movie. I saw that, it was actually quite good!!! :D ;)
Oooh... you have me hooked!
Write more soon. :)
Love, Sway
"Hey, Mia, what's the answer to question number eleven?" whispered James at her right, and during a test! So she just ignored him.
"Mia! I know you hear me and I know you know the answer!"
"James! Be quiet! I'm not telling you! I don't want to get into more trou-"
"Miss Rame! Talking during a test? I presume you were telling Mr. Potter-" It was still weird to here that "-because he is looking intently at you. Or maybe the soon-to-be married boy fancies other girls!"
"No, sir. I wasn't cheating. And it was rude of rude to make an assumption like that about James when you know that it isn't true." That remark landed her another ten points off Gryffindor for her smart mouth. What's going on with me? Is Ron right? She thought. The rest of the period went okay. She knew she aced the test.
But once the bell rang, Hermione bolted out of the classroom and then walked as fast as she could to the Great Hall for lunch.
"Hey, Mia! Wait up!" James yelled behind her. Hermione stopped and turned abruptly, colliding with him.
"Oof" is what came out of both their mouths, and Hermione left out another once she hit the ground.
"Sorry," she mumbled rubbing her head.
"You should really watch were you're going, Rame." It wasn't James' voice. It sounded an awful lot like-
"-Malfoy!"
"Yes, that's Me." he said grinning evilly down on her. James then saw Malfoy and came rushing over. He helped her up, then bent back down to collect her books. Just as James wasn't paying attention to what was above him, Lucius Malfoy leaned into Hermione and whispered in her ear, "You'd better watch your back, Rame," putting a lot of emphasis on her made-up last name, "I know who you and that red-headed twirp really are." His tone sent a chill down her spine and made the little hairs on her neck stand on end. Before Malfoy left, he gave Hermione another one of the classic Malfoy smirks at the sight of her face, seemingly pleased with her reaction. She didn't know what her face had shown, but it was exactly what he wanted it to show, she knew that.
James got up and put her books back in her bag.
"Are you okay, Mia? Did he do anything to you? Does some nose breaking need to happen?" The great thing about the Marauders was that they knew exactly when to get dirty. They had become like older brothers to her (save Sirius), and became very protective of her.
Hermione just smiled at his caring and shook her head. "No, It's okay." Mental note: *see Ron immediatley!!*
I'mm hooked post more or i will go iinsannnnnnnnne!!!!!!!!*runs around making wacky noises* :o :o :o :o :o :'( :'(
Lol! Okay! Here's a little more! ;D
The walk to the Great Hall was uneventful. James had found Remus and they started talking to each other, leaving Hermione alone to think.
Malfoy! That cunning, conniving little snake! How did he find out who we really are? No one knows besides Dumbledore and us. I know that Ron isn't stupid enough to go telling everyone. And we've never said our... Hermione gasped and stopped walking. Both James and Remus looked back at her.
"Is everything okay?" Asked Remus. Is everyone gonna ask me if I'm okay today? She rolled her eyes at herself.
"E-everything is f-fine," she stuttered. Neither of the boys looked convinced, but let it slide.
Was it possible that Malfoy was listening to their conversation earlier today? No one was in the corridor, though. But knowing a Slytherin, he was probably hiding in the shadows. Darn him! Now he can black mail us, and I know he will! Hermione power walked to the Great Hall, passing James and Remus. Once she got there, she looked for where Ron was sitting. And... ah! There he was at the edge of the table with... Perfect! An empty spot right next to him. She hurried, and not for the first time that day, to the seat next to him and plopped down. Now Hermione was exceedingly tired. She sighed. Oh well.
She leaned into Ron and whispered in his ear, "Ned, Malfoy knows about us. We need to talk as soon as possible." Ron's eyes widened and nodded.
He leaned back into her and whispered back, "Okay, we'll talk once you get back from your detention... In the common room." Then Ron went back to eating and Hermione made her plate.
If 'Ned' and 'Mia' hadn't wore such dead-serious faces, then Sirius Black, sitting two seats down, would have gotten a few ideas about the two... They did make a cute looking couple after all.
The rest of lunch went on without a hitch, and afterwards, it was back to classes.
OMG Shui u absolutely hafta update this ASAP! Or I might start crying again... *runs off crying* JUST KIDDING! lol. Ok well... I think those acting classes are getting to me...
That's GREAT Shui! I LOVE it! Hmm...is Sirius gettin' jealous? lol Oh, and thanks 4 the elephant! ;D
No! Not more crying! lol
Your welcome, MCS!
Thanx, guys, for reading my story and reviewing it! ^_^
Hey Shui, I never got an elephant! *runs off crying*
I didn't give you one?? O my o my.... sorry! *hands Amy an elephant* Anything I can do for you? Do u need a favor? ??? Soooooooo-har-rrrreeey! :-\
hey, i'm loving the story!! but ron and hermione can't go together!!!! me and ron hafta!!! ;) *lol* seriosly!!!
Lol Emily!
Here's a *little* bit more......
"Now, what I want you to do is clean the staircase. It's been filthy and needs a good scrubbing. Once you are done with that, I want you to polish the rails. Then you can go back to your common room. Here are the things you will need, " McGonagall pointed to a soapy, water filled pail, rag, and polishing kit. "Note that you aren't allowed to use your magic to help you clean. If you do, I'll give you more work. Good night." McGonagall walked away leaving Hermione alone in the dark corridor. This wasn't going to be a fun detention.
After an hour of cleaning down the long staircase, she only got to the middle. While humming a soft tune, she dipped the rag in the soapy water and started scrubbing the new step. But for some reason, all of a sudden, her hand smarted. It felt like she pricked her palm on some glass. Then Hermione remembered something; this was the same staircase as the one she and Ron fell down some weeks ago, and was transported here! So then that glass must be from...
Hermione took out her wand and muttered Lumos. She hovered her wand over the area where she cut herself on the glass. There were only a few shards, but also a very thin layer of sand. Oh great! Now we'll never get home. Hermione plopped down on the stairs getting her butt soaked. She rested her elbows on her knees, and cradled her head in her hands, completely ignoring the blood dripping from her hand.
"What are we going to do now? I can't believe this is happening! This is just terrific." She thought aloud.
After about ten minutes of just sitting there, she stood up and collected what was left of the time turner, put it in her pocket, then kept cleaning.
Heehee! That cleaning part reminded me of Cinderella for some reason... o.O; Heh. But anyway, keep going! ^_^
thanks for the elephant Shui. Oooh oooh!!!! Continue! this rocks!!!!!! ;) :D ;D
Great post Shui! Gengi's right...it reminded me of Cinderella too! u know in the disney cartoon one? she's cleaning by some stairs and when she's done, the cat comes and makes it dirty again. cats can be soo mean! >:(
Aw yeah! I remember that part! It made me so mad! lol :D
that's one of the reasons i don't like cats lol
Yes... cats are evil.
PLEASE UP DATE!!! i love the story!!! specially hermione and sirius! now ya have to put ron with me!*lol*seriously..... ;)
lol okay... what house r u in? And how old r u, if u don't mind me asking..
i'm in gryffindor, and i'm 13. ;D
hmmm okay, I'll try to squeeze you in there! ;D
hey, i sent u an im! look....
Saw it! ;D Replied to it, so, look too!
yup...i hate cats! lol plz update ur story, shui! it really rox! ;D
I'll try, but I'm having a hard time writing again. :P
Most likely more later tonight... :-\
hey shui, i'm goin out of my mind!!!! please post more! please.... :-\
sounds like you have a major case of writer's block. i HATE writer's block. it keeps me from writing.... :'(
hey shui, please post more! :'(
Yeah... writers block sucks!! It bugs me to death... I'm really sorry, I can't post more for a bit. :-\
KEEP GOING !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
---Sry, had to fix it.. it was messing up the screen :-\
~Shui*
*sits down and opens her Daily Prophet and waits* 8)
lol *joins Gengi in reading The Daily Prophet*
*joins in to* wow, a new dada teacher at hogwarts, interesting..... ;)
Sits down with A Conneticut Yankee in King Arthurs Court and starts to read. Hey, i have summer reading for muggle school too!
P.S. If you have this on your reading list, beware! The story is ok (after surviving A Tale of Two Cities any story is ok), but the main character pisses me off, jsyk.
SHUI! PLEASE PLEASE WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!!!! I'M GOIN CRAZY!!!!!!!^-^ oh, ya know how you said that u were gonna try to squeeze me into ur story? well, could u make me a seventh year like the others?
please up date ur story!
hey shui! hope u post more soon. *picks up Fellowship of the Ring and starts reading* (summer reading)....
Remember:
I luv draco!
cam, u are too funny! can you please read my fan ficcy?
Ok I promised myself that I wouldn't get short-tempered but this is really getting out of hand! Emily!!!! We know you have a fan fic!!!! I'm sorry. Don't be mad at me...
please post more, shui!
*shakes her paper and snorts at an artical Rita Skeeter wrote* What a cow.
*looks over her paper*
[size=10]HURRY UP SHUI!!!!!!!![/size]
*Quietly goes back reading*[/color]
lol. *joins Gengi in reading*
[size=20]I WANT MORE!!!![/size]
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UP DATE!!!!!!! PLEASE!!!!! :-\
PLEASE SHUI UPDATE!!!!!!
ditto
OMG! I LOVE THIS FIC! When r u gonna update? I'm dying of suspense! lol :) You are an awesome writer!
:o Oh my.........
I'll try and write more tonight..... don't get your hopes up, but there may be an update late tonight. :-\
oh please do up date! *looks at shui with begging eyes*
As long as you update before the 5th book comes out... ;D
Maybe, maybe not. I wanna give up the story.... :-\
No!! :o Don't do that! ^^; Just come back to it later! :) You might read it again, and get isperation to continue! :) ^.^
*sigh* fine...... lol
come on shui u can do it!!! think!!!! ;) ;D
FINALLY!!!!!! AN UPDATE!!!!! ^_________^ I'm so proud of myself even those this bit will probably suck! ^_^;;;
Here you go!
With a loud sigh, Hermione set down the polish jar, and headed back towards the Griffindor Tower. Once at the Potrait of the Fat Lady, Hemrione muttered "Golden Phoenix" and climbed tiredly through the hole.
"It's about time, Mia!" Ron didn't glance up from the book he seemed to be reading.
"Speaking of time, about what time is it?" She asked as she plopped down on a chair next to Ron.
"Around midnight."
Hermione was shocked. "Really? I was out that long?"
"Yeah!" There was a brief pause, then Ron said, "sense everyone is asleep, I think we can talk here... Okay, lets get on with it." Ron set his book on the table and turned to Hermione who was almost asleep.
"Get on with what?" Hermione asked. She had forgotten during the duration of the day what she and Ron were meeting about.
"Hermione!" He whispered, "Remember?"- she shook her head dully-"Malfoy knows about us!" At this point, Hermione was asleep.
"HERMIONE!" Ron yelled.
"Shh, Ron! I'm awake! I'm awake! No need to wake up the rest of the house." She said with quite a bit of irony.
"So did you hear what said before you fell asleep?"
"Yeah I remember now." she stifled a yawn.
"Okay, so what are we going to do about it? he inquired.
"Uhh... sleep. I really need sleep. Can we continue this tomorrow night? I don't want to fall asleep in class again."
Ron started at her tentively for a few moments before saying, "Fine. Tomorrow, here, the same time. Okay?"
"Kay." she said, know knowing what Ron said, but agreeing nontheless.
She walked up the girls dormitory stairs, and into the seventh year girls dorms. Without taking off any of her clothes, she slipped into bed that seemed as comfy as a cloud - opposed to other nights when it was as stiff as a board - and swiftly fell asleep.
The next morning, to Hermione's dismay, was classes again. They started off with Defense Against the Dark Arts, and ended with Arithmancy. Each class seemed to drag by so incridibly slowly. Hermione thought of a common muggle phrase and smiled.
"T.G.I.F." she muttered to herself.
"What was that, Mia?" Asked Sirius beside her.
"... huh? Oh. T.G.I.F." she repeted.
"And that is...."
"Oh! Sorry. It means 'Thank God It's Friday'." Sirius just mouthed an 'o', and she smiled at him.
That evening after supper. Hermione walked out of the great Hall a bit later that everyone else. As she walked up the first set of stairs, the little hairs on the back of her neck stood on ends, and she had this weird feeling that someone was following her. She turned around and looked for a presence, but found none. She shrugged off that feeling and kept walking, but a bit more aggitated now.
A few minutes later, she got that feeling again, and turned as fast as she could to try to catch a glimpse of the Follower. She saw a second of that oh-so-rare platinum blonde hair. A small startled scream/squeak escaped her throat, and she ran the rest of the way to Gryffindor Tower, practically yelling the password at the Fat Lady and climbing into the portrait hole. All of a sudden, she hit something, and fell to the ground.
Oh, it's just Ron! She thought as she looked up. "Ron!" She said hastely, standing up and brushing off her thighs. "Where are you going?" Ron looked like he had just got caught with his hand in the cookie jar, and Hermione didn't even know what he did! "What happened?" She said slowly, eyeing him.
"Uh... nothing happend! I... umm... that is to say...."
"Just spit it out will you?" She said, shutting the portrait door.
"I have to go somewhere." He replied fastly.
"Well where are you going??" Hermione was getting slightly annoyed by his behavior. "When are we gonna talk about... you know! Are you going to be back by midnight?" A few people in the common room where looking at the pair by the portrait hole, making quite a little scene.
"Probably not. We'll meet... tomorrow! Yes, tomorrow. We'll talk while... walking around the lake, okay?" Ron tried to get passed Hermione, but she stood her ground, denying him passage. "HERMI'" Ron's eyes went wide, catching his slip. "MIA!" he mended poorly. "Please move aside!" Now everyone in the common room was watching with interest. Ron and Hermione ignored them.
"Why won't you tell me where you're going?" Hermione was kind of hurt now that he wouldn't tell her. They were best friends! They could tell each other anything!
"Fine! I don't want to be more late than I already am." Ron gave a frustrated sigh and raked his hands through his hair, "I have a... date." He whispered.
"A date? With who?" Hermione was taken aback. Ron Wealsey... has a date?
"Emily.. umm... Smith? Yes. Emily Smith."
"That 6th year Ravenclaw?"
"Yeah! And I'm really late now! I told you, so will you please let me leave?"
"Yeah..." she stepped aside and let Ron through. "Watch out for Malfoy, he's out there somewhere. And have a good time!"
"K, Mia. Talk to ya later." Hermione stood there confused. Ron hadn't even dared to go out with anyone since he and Hermione broke up in the middle of their sixth year. Oh well. Everything has been so messed up since we got here. Hermione went over to an empty table and started her homework.
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That's all for now! ^_^ 20 points to your house if you can guess where I got Emily Smith. (and to the one who already knows this, you don't count! ;))
please keep going!
Hmmm? Only one reply? :( Well, I won't post more until I get a bit more than one! heehee ;)
:oOMG SHUI!!!!!!!!!!!!!! IT'S PHONOMANAL!!!!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!!!!! POST MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ;D ;D ;D ;)
;D; Uh.... thx......... heh heh....
lol sry if i scared u! lol
please post more!
I dunno.. seems like only 2 ppl are still reading this ;( ;( ;(
welll. i know how to get more!
Please keep going!!!!!
i been busy....but,its a greeeeeeaaaaaaaaaat story!
yep!
ok, i haven't been here in a while. sorry! it's GREAT! ur last two posts were "bloody brilliant"! plz post more, shui!
Heehee well ty...
There may be more up by saturday morning.... dunno. *maybe*
No one has seemed to wanna guess where I got the new character! I'll make it 50 points now to your house if you can get it!
uh..i dunno....ME?! ::)
Lol! Yaaay! Emily! You got it right! (even tho ur the one that gave me the name) keehee 50 points to Gryffindor! :D
Woohoo! :D Yay!!! You updated!!! :^D I'm just a little late. ^^; :B
MORE!!! ^____^
that's not fair! lol i knew the answer, but u said i couldn't answer if i knew
Oopsies! :-[ I meant the person that gave me the name couldn't answer... but no one did... then Emily did (the person that couldn't answer) SO I just gave to her. Sorry! :-\
Also, sorry I didn't write anymore like I said I would.... heh... heh.... -_-`
lol...i got 50 points! yes! lol j/k
heeheehee ;D;
come on shui! keep goin w/ the story! ;D
that's alrite, shui. plz post more soon! ;D
C'MON SHUI! ;D
Ugh I have no time! Sorry :-/
that's ok if u can't post NOW, but at least TRY to post some more next time, k, shui? ;D
COME ON SUI! YOU CAN DO IT!
plz post more! ;D
I'm sorry guys. I've completely given up on this story.. :-\ :(
Or... I could make a quick ending, if you'd rather?