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new story-the vampire

Started by pig, July 26, 2004, 11:19:30 PM

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pig

this is my first here anyway. it coming of the top of my head.
tell me what you think about it. set after hogwarts about 4 years

chapter 1- the letter

Harry laid on his bed with his wife Ginny. He thought about there life here in the barrow. Not that far from the Weasleys house were Ginny was brought up .He allways new this would be the place he would start a family. It was so hard these days to think about the good things in his life when so many bad things has happen. So many love ones dieing. his friands and family. All coused by one person voldermort. Even thou he is dead , Harry still feel's that he needs to help. that why he became a ora (not shore i spelt that right).

He then turned and looked at his wife who is carrying there baby boy.  6 months pregnant she is and Harry  still  thinks she's gorgeous. With her long red hair and elegant posture.

He smiled.  
(tap tap tap)

Harry looks around wondering what that sound was. He then herd it agian.  He look at the window it was a owl. Harry then walked over to open it and let the owl in. The owl zoomed in droped a letter then zommed back out as if it was scared  that somthing will hurt it if it never delivered the letter.
Harry bent down to pick it up.

He ripped the letter open. The first thing he saw was that it was written in red ink . it didnt feel or smell like ink it was blood.

it said

dear Harry

long time since i've seen you but i've  learned  to live alown.
did you get my pressent i sent you. i bet you had a hard job covering that up. so how have you been? me the usual hungry and bored. but you can't help me with that. how's Ginny heard she's pregnant what about Ron. i miss him the most.  hope you have a nice life. me i dont have one. my old life is forgotten and my new life is just starting.
see you around, but you would'nt want that would you.

love Hermione  

Harry's hands were shaking. he dropped the letter.  it lay on the floor. with a news paper . with a big headline Granger strikes agian. THe article talks about 5  people killed all with litlle wholes in there necks and all lost a lot of blood.


Kiara Johnson


pig

 chapter two- bitten

Ron sat in his kitchen drinking a large fire wiskey. He's hands were shaking as he took another big gulp of his drink. He two got a letter from Hermione. It lay crumpled next to him on the table. He and Hermione were going to get married, it was going to be the happiest day of there lives. A new start but it never happened. Instead Ron sits here drinking thinking about her.  thinking about what she is, how she lives and dosnt even care.

the letter said about how she was living a lot like harrys also written in blood. But it was diffrent. Like the Hermione he loved was still there. but he new this was'nt true. how can it be. when this Hermione is killing every day. she said she still loves him but how can a monster like her love.

Then ron jumped as he herd Harry's voice. he droped his wiskey and it fell to the floor . it smashed into pieces .

"dam."  Ron shouted.

Harry then walked up to him he just asparated into the room (think i spelt that right)

"let me help" Harry said getting out his wand to clear the mess up.

"no it's all right" ron said as he casted a spell the glass vanished.

"did you get a letter " harry asked

"yes" ron said ever so quitly. his face was very pale.

"we cant keep trying to cover it up the paper all ready Knows.
ive been tell them every time that it is'nt her its another vampire.  but we cant keep it quit. she killing people now not animals. why did this have to happen. ive talked to the mistery. they have a signed me a new mission. i have to kill Hermione. "

ron looked at harry in shock. his eyes whent wide and he pored his self another drink

"there must be another way. it's Hermione Harry"

"it isnt ron. it may look like her sound like her. but it is not her."

"i know but i still love her" ron said as he took another gulp of drink.

"ive got go now are you going to be fine by your self"

"yea go. say hi to ginny for me "

with a pop harry was gone.

Ron agian sat by his self agian. he then went back to think about hermione. but this time he thought about how it all happen

(okay i hope you like this part next is how Hermione became a vampire )

Ginny Weasly

My motivation
An oath I've sworn to defend


My dedication
To all that I've sworn to protect
I carry out my orders
With not a regret

pig

 sorry i hav'nt written fow a few days bin up my friands house and i found it hard to find a plot.
okay here's how hermione turns into a vampire. hope ya like it.

Hermione and ron were madly in love. nothing could spole it. they have bin liveing together for about a year now and Ron thought about proposing to her he took her out to dinner then came back home where he bended on one knee and said "hermione i love you,will you marry me" Hermione sqwilled and said yes.
rons life was now compleat.
*****
Hermione walked home from her late shift at saint Merladys (i think its that. there Hospital) she has bin a healer there for about a year.
she walked home with shopping in her hands. it was waying her down so she thought she'l take a short cut through the park. there in the shadows lurked a vampire. he stared at hermione. stuned by her Beauty. he saw somthing in her. somthing he liked. he thought about biting her but no he wanted to talk to her first so he left her alown for now.
hermione came to the park entrance and walked to her house safe. untouched for now.
****
the vampire did get his chance to meet Hermione as she droped her workers bage carring her name and where she worked. he picked it up and smiled "Hermione such a lovly name"
he was quit good looking he had long blond hair pale skin and deep blue eyes he always wore black. he became a vampire many years ago. he was very Lonely. He wanted Company. someone to share his way of life with and he new he had found her.
***
Hermione rushed around the flat looking for her wand. she looked evrywhere. Ron wasnt helping. he was fast asleep in bed.
"where is it" she screeched shoving the cluter of the table. "this place is a mess"  "ron RON!"

she then saw him come out of there bedroom in nothing but a shirt and pant. his hair all messy.

"wwwhat" he yourned.

"wheres my wand"

"how am i spose to now mabby it in the washing" he said not realy thinking.

"now why would it be in there, ur ile go check"

she worked over to the wash bin and in one of her robes was her wand. she grabed it kissed ron then rushed out. outside the door she then quickly turned around and said to ron " ow i foggort please can you clear this place up.*ron frowned *

"you have got a day of"

"okay"
hermione turened and left once agan.

this chap isnt finish . it might be to long i have to many idea's LOL

Fawkes


pig

 here the next part.

Hermione rushed into work and qickly got changed. A newbie was coming today and  it was her responsibility to show them  the ropes, gide them, help them out. that sort of thing.  She step out of the  changing rooms and into a brightly lit hall. She worked in the emergancy ward sort of the ER of the magical world. all serious life threatening cases came here. One time  they had a man come in who got severally  burnt by a dragon. He could hardly breath, but after they worked on him he was beginning  to recover they then sent him to the server burns and cuts ward.

Hermione went to the information desk and asked if she know the trainee has arived yet. But receptionist said that she ddn't know.
She was just going to walk down to a ward to check up on a patient ; when Hermione heard a man call her name from  behind. She turned around .


"yes how can i help you"

"hi some one said you would be showing me around" he said with a smile his teeth were very straight and shinny.
for some reason all she could do was smile, nod and give a weak yes. He was very good looking; blond long hair and vary pale for some reason.

Why am I acting like some school girl with a crush I love Ron. Hermione thought but thouse eyes. they just drue her in so bright hypnotizing her she shook her and said

"yes come this way" she said leading him into a office.

****
Lema the vampire new she was the one she was Beautiful  and so smart. he followed Hermione as they past the entrance; Lema remembers how  he got here. he sneeked up on the real inturn one night and bite him. he took his ID card and pretended he was him. he smiled at Hermione and she looked away he new that he was getting to her.
Hermione showed him there time table  and talked a bit about what they where doing.

"we will be working on the emergancy ward. you will  be working with me" Hermione said blowing her hair out of her eyes. All that day they worked they had so meny diffrent cases. magic abuse  and arguments that have goten a little out of hand.

Lema began to feel hot. Like his skin was burning. He dashed to the tollets and quickly  drank the potion which would stop him from burning up in the sun and turn to ash.
he didnt have much of the potion left. A wizzard he knows douse it for him as there are  ingredants he can not toach. but he dousn't have much left and the wizzerd dous'nt have much time left to life. He looked in the mirrow and hissed he saw nothing which was the problem he punched and it smashed then magicly the broken bits menned togetther agian and he stormed out. she better be worth it he said angry but quit.

"there you are" Hermione said rushing up to him."come on we need to help Miss Ankey "
Lema  folowed.


pig

Over the pass three weeks Lema had become a friend to her and Ron. Hermione invited him too dinner with them. But Harry did'nt like him he new somthing was up. During dinner he would come over  all hot and look ill then after a trip to the loo he was fine. Ginny seamed fine with him and said that Harry was working to hard at work and said if you dont relax you will be like Moody. thinkin every ones out to get you when there not. but Harry kept an eye on him and  was mor friendler towards him. Which made Hermione very happy.

****
Lema wanted this to happen. He wanted Hermione to trust him and she did. But her friend Harry he did'nt trust him, he new somthing was up and Lema hated him for this. he could ruin evrything. Make Hermione less trustin and see him for what he truly is. so he will do it soon. very soon.

****

Hermione once agian was walking throw the park. this time she did not have shoping.it was getiing dark so Hermione walked faster. she heard a rustling in the bushes and jumped it was a cat. she plunged her hand into her pocket and griped her hand tightly around her wand just in case.

nothing bad is going to happen she said trying to reassure herself. then throw the darkness she heard a voice.

"why would you say that"
she turned around and flung her wand at the mans throut. he stept from the shadows and Hermione saw the pale face of Lema. she immediately put her wand back into her pocket. and sighed in releaf.

"i am so sorry"

"that okay its pritty scary out here" Lema said getting closer to her.

"why dont you asparate if you dont like to take this root"he said trying to make convenstation

"i cant we live in a muggle area and its not that far"

"ow, do want me to walk you home"

"no its okay i can manage"

"i insist"

"okay" Hermione said it is more safer  and Ron would worry if in not back yet she thought

they walked a little bit and then Lema stoped.Herimione turned arouned and screemed. she saw huge yellow eyes and a very pale face much more paler them before and when he smiled she saw two huge pointy fangs. she ammediately thought vampire. she couldent believe it and did'nt want to Lema was a vampire. he lied to her she got her wand out and ran but she then stop dead in her tracks  beacuse he was in front of her. she looked into those yellow eyes. she couldn't look away or move in that matter instead she stood there hypnotizes as Lema beared his fangs and plunged them into her neck.

pig

heres the last part of this chapter.
she was now running as fast as possible. her vision was blurry. She swayed and tripped a little as she run. Hermione felt weak and frail. She had lost so much blood. All she thought about was Ron. About how much she loved him. They were going to get married and Hermione now new that will never happen. a few silent tears fell from her eyes. she stopped. she couldn't run anymore. the whole world was spinning. Hermione fell to the floor. She used all of her energy to aspperate back ( way of transport)
home where Ron was.

****
Ron had just came in from work he was an Ora just like Harry. He had a very hard day today. All that trouble with a few Death eaters who still think Voldermort is a live and were trying to contact him. he wasn't alive he new that because he was there when Harry killed him in there last year at Hogwarts. Ron sat down and kicked of he's shoes.  he sat there and relaxed. then he heard a familiar crackle.

He looked around  and saw Hermione stand there swaying. She looked a mess her clothes where covered in bits of blood and mud. He ran to her and she fell into his arms.
Ron stared at Hermione in shock as she took in jagged sharp breaths.

"mione what's wrong speak to me" Ron said in a shaky almost in tears voice.
he looked in to her eyes. large brow scared eyes looked back at his.

"vampire"  Hermione said in no more then a whisper.

"who" Ron was now crying.  He felt like someone one was ripping out his heart. He loved her so much. He placed his hand on her neck and tried to stop the bleeding but it didn't work it kept gushing out of her wound.

"who did this two you Hun. Hermione"  Ron said she did not replay. He felt her heavy limp body lie in his arms. he gathered her up and held her close in his arms rocking back and forth.

"please don't be dead please i love you." He heard no heart beat or no breathing . She was dead

"no no no no" he said he cried so hard still holding the life less body of Hermione.

there was another crackle and Ginny was in the room she looked at them and screamed .She fell to her knees sobbing.
******
















pig

 here's the next part tell me what you think of this story.

******
chapter 3 the intruder

Ron sat in his chair drinking. Remembering the soft sent of Hermione and the last time he saw her as the girl he loved. It took so long for Ginny and Harry to get Hermione out of his arms there words and reason were nothing to him and in some part of him they still are. He was meant to stake her but some part of him said she wasn't bitten. but he new he had to.  he was going to jam the sake into her heart when her eyes flew open. Gasping she looked at him and then got up and ran to the window and jumped out they were at least 4 floors up .He looked down out of the window and saw her running.

They can keep telling him that the vampire is not Hermione. when it smells feels looks and sounds like her. He wanted to  know who did it. He staid awake for hours in the office, questioned people at the hospital, retaking her steps. He never got sleep and he still doesn't now ,knowing she's out there killing people. Harry and Gin were worried about him. He never showed them the real pain that this caused him. never cried.

Through the entire investigation  he saw suspicious evidence about Lema. How he always went to the bathroom every 2 hours and spent at least 40 minutes  in there. He researched about how vampires can stay in the light. So he marched down  to where lama lived and saw there was no mirrors. He took one with him and looked at it from the corner of eye. he saw no reflection. he grabbed the stake that was in his inner pocket and held it to his chest.

"where's Hermione" Ron shouted

" how am i spouse to know"

Ron put more force on the stake. Lema's eyes flashed and he bared his fangs.. he pushed Ron back he slammed agents  the wall, hitting his head.

" this is her new home she likes it here and if i where you i would never come here again!"

Ron ran at him. how dear he he thought. He held the stake high in the air.

" i thought you where are friend"

he then plunged it in his chest his heart.

Lema screeched then turned into a pile of ash.

so many bad memories Ron thought and took another swig of drink.






















pig

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]move]here's the next part sorry about taking long. please tell me what you think dont be shy. i just wanna no if anyones reading and you probley are. why am i baberling on you wanna read the story not me so here it is injoy.[/move[
;D

Ginny sat at home on the sofa. She felt so fat. She could hardly  see her feet. But she new that in the end that it would be worth the back aches  and bursting bladder. Not to mention that her feet hurting  everyday. She new that inside her right now was a living baby. Life she and Harry created. This made her feel  warm. She got up and waddled  to the fridge. She no longer went to work or use much magic. It creates to much of a strain for you and the baby. Thats what all her doctors say. But when she really needed it she would use it. Little thing don't harm it was the big thing that did. Ginny got a glass from the bottom draw . Bending down holding her stomach and poured her self a glass of milk. It was quit late and Harry wasn't back yet she was worried so much about him and her brother. Every time she saw him. There was nothing but a hunted expression his face. Hermione meant so much to all of them. She mist her everyday. It killed her Knowing that she was still out there, a creature of the night something evil. But it wasn't her. Ginny kept saying this in her head. But how can it not be it looks like and sounds  like her. Ginny began to cry. She mist her friend so much. She sat there in the kitchen floor crying.

****
Hermione stood there  in the room. She wanted to see them her old friends. She felt lonely. Since Ron killed Lema. She remembered coming back with a nice meal and found the pile of ash. She didn't hate Ron for it. But just wished he didn't do it. There was still a part of her that still loved Ron. You need someone to share your life with when you lived for ever. The lust for blood is to strong looking at Ginny made her hungry. She's got so big she thought. Ginny didn't notice her because when you are a vampire you learn to blend in with the  darkness and be silent. She new it got to them and she liked that it did. But now as she stared she wanted to go back but that only lasted a seconded she thought about how shy and naive she was. She's better like she's stronger. Not a weak know it all book worm. That what she felt like she was. Yeah she stood up for her self but not enough  but know if someone got in her way she would kill them. She hated that Harry was hunting her. But if her plan goes right she wont have to worry. She shuffles a little in the dark and something drops and smashes on the floor.

"who's there" she hears Ginny say. She sees her lean towards a cupboard and takes out her wand. She points it in the direction of the crash. She heaves her self to her feet. Looking in every direction for an intruder. But she did not find one. It was now the right time to show her self. Hermione stepped out from the shadows. Ginny gasps as she looks into those large yellow eyes.






















pig

this isnt that long its the end of this chap


***
Ginny stood there with her wand out. She looked at her old friend.

"stay back" Ginny said. She triad to be tough but her voice shook. Ow how she changed. Hermione was deathly pal as a corps . Ginny triad not to cry because she has not seen her since she found her body in Ron's arms.

Its not her Hermione's gone. Ginny thought trying to rear shore herself. But it dint work, she believed her eyes not the facts. Hermione moved closer and Ginny moved back.

"hallo to you to Ginny, I'm not goanna hart you not yet anyway" a small smile spread a cross her lip.

"why do you come. You are not are friend anymore"

"is that what you really think gin" Hermione  quickly got behind Ginny at super fast speed.

Ginny wondered where she went. Then she heard a cold voice in her ear. She jumped back and fell to the floor.

"see since Ron killed Lema I've been lonely I cant spend my eternity bye my self." hermione said not even helping Ginny up.

Ginny triad to get up. But couldn't dam pregnancy Ginny thought. She then realised she had no wand. She looked around for it.

"looking for this" Hermione griped her wand in her hand.

"as I was saying I want you Ron and Harry to join me. Its great. No rules. No work just fun and if you don't I will have to kill you. Youl never die. Your live for ever! You will never see your child die . She will grow up then stay young for ever. Think about it. Ow and tell Harry to stop hunting me." she throw back her wand then vanished.

Ginny staid on the floor waiting for Harry. She now new that wasn't her and finely expected that Hermione was dead. Ginny sat there staring at the walls. Not moving.


























Fawkes


pig

heres the next part sorry for taking so long

 Chapter 6 the meeting.

Harry sat in the big board room in the mystery of magic's . He stared at the cloak on the wall then at the empty chair next to him where Ron was spouse to be. He worried for him. He drank more. Harry told him that if he doesn't stop he's drink his self to an early grave. that's when Ron through a cup at him and yelled you don't know  anything . But the time Ron through it he was gone. Harry thought about the old days when they Had no worries. A tiny tear sprung in his eye and he quickly wiped it away. Harry's head turned as he heard the door open but it wasn't Ron it was his dad the minister of magic. He sat down and the top of the table and looked around. at the  meeting was Luna, Justin, Semaus, Sarah and him. These were the people who were working on the case about hermione.
Mr weasley eyes scans to his sons chair he frowns as he sees Ron is not there. Harry triad to say it wasn't her but it was. in the end he told them that Hermione has been killing. Now they have been tracking her for a month.

"now that most people are here we can start the meeting. What I want to discuss today is about are task. Were changing it. Instead of captain the vampire we have to kill her"   he frowned.

" I know most people here loved her dearly but she's killing, we have to stop her. She has been sighted around the forest. I think that might be her home. that's where we will find her."

Harry couldn't believe his ears. He dint wanna kill hermione how can he. He wanted to say something bout how could he when somewhere he new that they had to.

Fawkes

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