sunset

[pig]

 pig sat by the lake the sky was mixture of red and orange.  the cool air rusted the leaves. pig got out some paper and some paints and begone to paint the sene infront of

[LavyBrown]

"What you painting?" Lavy said walking up from behind.

[Neo]

Neo leaned against a palm tree and watched.

[pig]

 Pig jumped a lttle she thought no one was around " o its juast you lav you scard me im panting the sunset its realy peacfal and carm" Pig dipped her brush into some walter and added some fine lines of the lake in the painting it was very detaled and was full of warmth

[LavyBrown]

"It's beautiful, your very good."

[Neo]

Neo silently moved up to Lavy from behind and slid his arms around her waist under her arms and put his head on her shoulder.

[pig]

Pig loked at Lavy " thank you "  she noticed Neo and gave him a odd look

[LavyBrown]

"This is Neo." Lavy said noticing Pig's look. She smiled.

[jon weasley]

jon walked in you are very good pig
(im trying to to take ginnys advice she said i have been in too many arguments)

[LavyBrown]

(one more suggestion when your charator is talking put it in qoutations so then people don't have to read what you wrote three times to understand what you charator is saying and doing)

"Hi, Jon." Lavy said glancing over at him.

(like that)

[jon weasley]

"wats up"

[LavyBrown]

(tudum you got it)


"Nothing really, you?"

[Neo]

Neo ignored pig and jon and instead nuzzled Lavy's neck. "How are you? Did you miss me?" he wispered in her ear.

[jon weasley]

nothing

[LavyBrown]

"Very much." she wispered back to Neo.