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Started by Vanessa, January 30, 2008, 07:09:20 AM

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Vanessa

"YOU CAN'T DO THIS TO ME!" Vanessa scremed helplessly. She kicked furiously, but the two men kept their solid grip on her arms. She felt tears stream down her face.

"My own mother..." Vanessa couldn't believe that her mother had been the one to turn her in. "You spent days wondering why I didn't want to follow in your footsteps. Well unlike you I don't want to be a cold hearted muderer. I hate you... I hate both you and father. Go to hell!"

The guards pulled her away and she saw a single tear fall down her mothers cheak. Now her mother realized that she was pollisbly killing her own daughter. It couldn't get much worse. Vanessa was pulled away, knowing that whatever was about to happen, wasn't going to be easy.
--Taken--

LordBlaZe

Blaze was waiting for Vanessa, they were supposed to meet up about 30 mins ago. ~Hey, where you at?~ he thought to her. Maybe she was just late he thought.
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Vanessa

I need help. I'm in major trouble. If anything happens, I love you... Vanessa screamed, trying to lead Blaze to where she was. The men threw her to the ground, kicking dust from the forest floor into her face. She coughed, then muttered a few curse words under her breath.
--Taken--

LordBlaZe

Blaze got up in a flash and took his wand out but didn't know what to do next, he didn't know how to trace thoughts and stuff. ~Where you Vanessa, give me any location~ he thought to her, thinking of what to do.
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Vanessa

In the forest, not that far from the school. Vanessa said, rambling off the rest of the directions.
--Taken--

LordBlaZe

Blaze apparated as soon as he could, he wasn't sure where he was but he could hear talking. Then he thought he saw what appeared to be 2 big guys and another women. Before they could see him he casted a shadow enchantment over himself. He should be almost invisible as long as he stayed in the shadows, and that wasn't hard being in the forest.

He tried to get a close look but didn't want to get caught so he took his wand out and tried to find Vanessa
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Vanessa

"Let me go!" Vanessa pulled an arm away and punched one man in the face. They had taken her wand so now all she had was herself. She felt pretty hopeless.
--Taken--

Maddy

Maddy was supposed to meet up with Blaze and Vanessa awhile ago now. "Blaze... Where are you and V?" She thought to him. After searching for Vanessa this was the last thing she could think of to do to see where they were.

LordBlaZe

~MADDY! i dun't know but Vanessa's gone, im near the end of the forest~ Blaze thought to Maddy quickly. He then moved around until he thought he saw Vanessa. He moved closer with cautious. There were only 2 and he had the element of suprise so he used it. "Stupefy" he whispered and knocked out the guy grabbing Vanessa. The other one turned around but Blaze vanished back into the shadows before the guy could see him.
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Vanessa

Vanessa jumped as a spell hit one guy. She didn't know where it came from. She looked around catiously.
--Taken--

LordBlaZe

The other guy panicked or so Blaze guessed. "Stupefy" he whispered again and hit the man square in the chest. It was almost too easy but he was guessing that there would be more in the escape part. He jumped out of the shadow and ran to Vanessa, "Oh God, baby what happened?" he asked his eyes filled with fear.
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Vanessa

Vanessa's eyes filled with anger, but sadness was hidden beneth them. "My mother did this. Just because I wasn't evil. She turned me in to Voldemort."

Her hands shook, partly from the now falling snow, and part from fear.
--Taken--

Maddy

Maddy had a feeling she knew exactly where Vanessa was. Possibly the same exact place she was taken when Voldemort captured her.

Maddy wasn't too far from that part in the forest so she just began to run as fast as she could. When she got close enough she began to hear voices... but they sounded really familiar. She stopped in the shadows before revealing herself to see who the people in the clearing were. It was Blaze and Vanessa. Maddy stepped out from the darkness to see what happened to V.

"Are you guys alright?" She asked curiously.

Vanessa

"I'll be fine." Vanessa lied. "I know where Voldemort's at..."

Suddenly Vanessa grabbed her wrist and dropped to her knees in pain. She quickly removed her hand to see the small V on her wrist. She had always told people that it just simply stood for Vanessa. Truthfully Voldemort had placed it there when she was a small child. She quickly grabbed it again, and bit her lip, fighting tears.
--Taken--

LordBlaZe

Blaze caught a glimpse of her wrist, she looked hurt. "Ok we have to get out of here" he said looking at both of them but before he knew it he saw someone coming behind Maddy. "MADDY!! behind you" he said and raised his wand but he saw a light and flew backwards in pain.
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Fifteen Percent Concentrated Power Of Will
Five Percent Pleasure
Fifty Percent Pain
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