Ryan Evans (changed a little reah now! ! )

[Ryan]

Name:Ryan Evans
 
AGE:17
 
Height:6'6

Appearance:tall,with kinda long brown hair,and brown eyes he is in convers all the time and you can find him in nice shirts but not all the time and in skinny jeans.

RACE:wizard,normal powers, can change into a dog.

Parents:Sofie and Cody Evans 

Personality:Ryan is a normal guy but has a temper if you lite one of his fusese and cna get made easy and he wants to find the one someday but hasn't met the right girl yet but is hopeing to .He is pretty much a good guy but with a temper.   

Likes:to sing and play the gutair,he is in a band but took time off to come here,he wrights pomes and short stories but he dosen't think he is that good but that is him.

Dislikes:preppy people and people that think it is all obut them,people how tell him is is bad at his work wanna be emos

Power:can read minds, can control it sometimes when ever the mom is full.

History:He is in a band but then cam ehere and took some time off in his band he can sing a little and is a kinda good dancer.He didn't want to come here but his family made him.  WHen he was 15 he was about to rum away with his band and get in signed but his parents stoped him and he has never forgave them for it but when he gets out of here he is going to go with them and get there band signed and al will be good he hopes but he is very happy to have a good band and they are grat to but he just misses them alot.He is very close with his sister Keke and will do anything for her and will kichksome's azz for her to so I am keeping an eye on you.

[fudge0604]

ok... Make more details! I know you have a picture but.... When you tell your char has brown hair and brown eyes and is tall, you don't actually describe it so well!
And make some flaws into him. It is boring to RP with someone who always is nice and so on,
or as you also can call it: A Mary or Gary Sue.( If you don't know what it is go on wikipedia.org and check it out). And in likes... It just says two things. And that doesn't really tell anything special either..?
And his history is short and doesn't really tell us something about his life. And get more into personality.
If you think of a real person you know that that person have more, sides about he/she than this bio has...

But then. Good job. And I know its not easy to start out good but you'll get the hang of it!
And remember: In RPs please make long and descriptive posts! ( It is a lot more fun then! and there is a lot of more action)

[Ryan]

ok Well I really don't know what to put so do you have any ideas I don't know how to really do it because it is kinda hard.

[Shara2007]

That easy I mean is your charaters to caring. Is he muggle born if so how does his family feel now that he came to Hogwarts. Does he have any problems like temper not very good at spells.

[fudge0604]

Yes... Thanks Sarah! You said what I didn't exactly know to say.
It is much more fun to read a bio when its long, well descriptive and to the point.
Just flaw him a bit but don't to much! ;D

[_-Aaron-_]

Ryan read some other peoples and you'll get an idea of what people want to see. It's a good start though

[LavyBrown]

Read some of the oldies ones. ours are pretty good. mine, neo, goblet, ginny, em...... the list goes on and on

[Ryan]

I like yours Lavy...but I don't know i have to think about it .

[LavyBrown]

lol don't worry, you don't have to think of it all right now. When I first posted mine it was only the bare minumim, age, name race appereance. and then as I started RPing I started thinking about Lavy's life and that's when I wrote all the other stuff.

[~Harry Potter~]

My orignal is pretty bad but here is a link to my current one, which is a great example of a bio. 

http://www.harrypotterfan.com/forum/index.php?topic=4534.0

Just think about it some and have it branch off from there.  Like his history, think about why he woudl be sent off to hogwarts, then go into what his family life was like, think of his family, siblings, friends.  Just let things come to you.  History is by far the hardest to create in my opinion but yours is getting better. 

[_-Casey-_]

its pretty good hope we can roleplay together sometime

[Ryan]

thanks i am stil thinking

[Hailey]

Cool Bio.  Can't wait to RP with you.

[Ryan]

yeah thanks

[walker08]

Hi. I'm natalie. I'm new. Hope we can get to know each other.