Kelli Potter's story. PLEASE read!!!

[ateenangel]

Okay I'm going to start my first ever fan ficiton.  Please tell me if you like it or not!!!  My name isn't Kelli but I'm using this name cause I don't like my real one.  It's Skye and I'm not 15 but the age fits the year Harry's in.  And I stink at spelling!

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   15 year old Kelli woke up with a start.  She had been having the strangest dream ever.  There had been a boy with a lightning bolt on his head, messy black hair, and green eyes in it.  There was also a man with red slit eyes and pale skin.  She had been watching this man blast a green light out of a stick and mutter something that made no sense.  THe boy had been hiding in a bush and she didn't think he had seen her.  The man had turned to face her and she had woken up.
   Kelli got out bed and looked over at her clock.  It was only 6:57am.  Kelli frowned to herself, Why did I have such a strange dream?  She walked over to her dresser and looked in the mirror.  The mirror had a frame with flowers on it.  Kelli looked at it and for a second thought the flowers moved but it was so upsurred sounding that she dismissed the idea almost immediatly.  Kelli peered into the oval mirror.  She had long wavy black hair with exactly the same green eyes as the boy in her dream.  You know if I was a boy I could have been that other kid in my dream,she thought.

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What did you guys think?  It gets more exciting so don't worry if you were bored.

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Anybody?  Since no ones repling I'll  continue.

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Kelli went back over to her bed and sat down.  She stared into space then thought Oh my gosh!  My rooms a pig pen!  She got up to tidy it but she couldn't get her mind off that dream.  She dicided to go eat some breakfast.  As she left her room she thought, I wish my room was clean!!  Even though she didn't notice it because she was headed down the hall her room all of a sudden glittered with cleaness.
    She started to make some bacon, her favorite, but was interrupted  by her mother. "Thank you for cleaning your room honey!  It really sparkles.  That must have been hard."
   Kelli looked at her mom and then ran out of the room, barely yelling back, "I forgot something!"

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good job!

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Kelli ran up the stairs to her room and flung open the door.  Her mom wasn't lying, it was clean, sparkly clean.  Everything was were it was supposed ot be.  "Oh my gosh how did this happen?  I geuss I can't tell mom that I didn't do it."  Kelli thought for about 10 minutes then her stomach started to growl so she went down-stairs.  On the second stair she tripped and went flying down hte stairs.  Her mother had just walked into the hall and saw Kelli fly right into the floor.  There was a sickening crunch...

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...and Kelli disappeared.  "Kelli?  Kelli?" her motehr was screaming.  Her father ran into the room.
"Doris, what is it?  What's wrong?  Where's Kelli?"
"Oh John,  Kelli was coming down the stairs and tripped and fell tehn just disappeared."  Her mother fainted from shock.

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PLEASE tell me if it sux!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Anybody?  COME ON!!!!!!!!

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Okay, I'll continue.

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While her mother was fainting Kelli found herself falling on a strange bed in a strange place.  "AAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!"
"Harry are you alright?" Ron asked as he woke up.
"Who's that Harry?" Dean said.
"Wadya wake us up fo?" a sleepy Seamus asked.  Neville kept on sleeping.
Kelli ignored them, "Where am I?"  
Harry Potter got off the floor and dusted himself off.
"Who the heck are you?  And how did you get into my house?  What house are you from?."
Kelli was really confused.  Harry turned on a light and got a good look at Kelli.  "Hey you're that girl out of my dream aren't you?"
"Who is she Harry?" Ron asked.  All the boys had got dressed in their robes.
"You dreamed that?  I thought you hadn't seen me or you would have said something.  What were you saying about witchs?  Surely you don't believe a word of that witch stuff?"  There was a loud bang on the window that interupted her questions.  Harry opened it and a one owl flew in.
"This is Hedwig." Harry said as he showed her the white owl. There was a letter with he owl.
"Let me read it!"  Kelli said as she got out of the bed.  "What does it say?"  She wripped it out of Harry's hand and read it to her self.  "Oh who's Siruis Black.  He writes nice letters."  As if to disagree with her there was a BANG and Prof. MaGonagol appeared.
"Hello Harry, I'm sure you remember the rule of no visiters at night.

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"I remember ma'am."  Harry replied.  "but she just appeared, honestly!"
"Honestly Potter you know that you can't dissaperate are or do the oppisite.  Girl come here.  What house are you in?  Harry quidditch practice is about to start you had better hurry."
BANG  Albus Dumbledoor walked in, "Milerva leave them alone.  Child come here." he said with a jester to Kelli.

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PLEASE REPLY!  I need to know if I should just keep writing or if itr stinks!

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Kelli left he boys looking dumstruct.  As she left she heard Dean whisper, "Jees, Harry she's cute."
and Harry reply, "Dean she's like a twin!"
The word twin raced down her spine.  Could it possible be?  She knew she had been adopted when she was 6 months old but it didn't seem possible.  Judging by their acsents she was somewhere in Europe possibly England.  "Um sir?" Kelli geussed he must be important because everyone bowed or nodded in his direction.
"Hold your questions child we need to talk."  With that he went up to a stone gargoyle and muttered, "Bertie Botts." The gargoyle moved and Kelli screamed behind her a ghost had glided past.  She was led up some stairs and into a large office.  
On the walls there were moving pictures, on the shelves there as a bowl of silvery stuff, on a desk there was the name Albus Dumbledore, Finest Headmaster Yet and in the corner was a large bird.  Kelli loved fantasy books so she figured it was a phoenix.  "Nice phoenix."  She said to Dumbledore.
"Well child tell me your story."
"It It all started--" she spent the next 2 hours telling information and recieving info.
"Well Kelli would you like to atend this school?"
"I'd LOVE to!!"
"why don't you wait here while I chat with the teachers.  Here you might enjoy this book."  He handed her Hogwarts a History  and left the room.

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After Kelli left the boys in the dormitory started to chatter.  "Harry who was that?"
"What was she doing in here?"  
"She's CUTE!!!"  Then Hemione came walking in with Fred and George.
Hermione said, "Harry who was she?  She was our age but she wasn't here before.  Dumbledore came out and he looked scared."
"I don't know who she was, she just appeared!"
"Harry really we both know that no one can dissaperate or-"
"I know! I know!  Fred Geroge why are you here?"
"We have practice!  Come on, you're late!"  THey said in unisin.
Ron was starving so he said, "Let's all get some toast really fast and go to practice."
When they went down to breakfast there weren't any teachers at the table but there was the head boy and girl and all the perfects protroling the hall.  The roomwas alive with chatter.  Harry asked, "Do you think it's because of the girl?"
Hermione looked scared and whispered, "maybe."

[Hermione_Granger]

hey, this is pretty intresting! and my mum spells kelli just like u!!

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Thanx 4 replying!!

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Albus Dumbledore opened the door to his office about an hour later.  Kelli didn't even notice.  She was so entranced in her book.  "It's decided."  Kelli jumped nearly a foot off her chair.  Albus continued "that even though it's been a month since school started that you can stay.  All the Prof. will be coming up to watch you be sorted.  Normally you would have a cermony but today has been different."
"I've got ot tell my parents!!"
"We have contacted them and sent them a list of supplies."  The door opened and the Prof. strolled in.  They interduced themselves then Dumbledore got out the Sorting Hat and put it on Kelli's head.

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The Gryffindors and the Slytherins were in Potions when the door was flung open and Albus and Kelli walked in.  "Excuse me Snape," he turned to the class," as some of you know there is a new student in the 5th year. She has no magical background and has never used magic in her life so please help her out."
Malfoy looked at her, "What house is she in?"  Kelli wasn't wereing any robes.  She was just in som ejeans and a Washington D.C. t-shirt.
Dumbledore frowned slightly,"Kelli doesn't have a house and probally won't be getting one very soon."
Kelli looked at him and frowned, her voice defensive.  "Wait, I didn't mean to blow up that dumb hat any way, okay.  How can I get that into your thick head?"  She walked over and put her books over between Malfoy and Pansy, still talking.  "Jees some people are deaf."  
Albus Dumbledore left quickly frowning.