Jack Chance [different version than the original]

[JackChance]

Name: Jack Chance
Nicknames: Jaque, Jackie, Jauqe
House: right here in Gryffindor of course
Year: 6th
Appearance: Like my avatar.
Magical Animal: a bear-ferret.  only two created in history.  I own one of them.
Blood Status: Pure-Blood

Story of my life:
Jack Chance, first son of Michael and Jessica Chance.[I changed my parents' names again, heh...] Grew up in Yorkshire, and after 10 years of advanced home school magic training, was invited into Hogwarts.

[I loves YOUz]

could be better but not bad...

[drewskit]

Do you want to start a story?

[Ginny Weasly]

Jack, you know better than that!
You are better than that.

Do it again, and this time put some work into it. ;)

[drewskit]

Well if you change it lets make a story.

[malfoy_luv14]

It's kinda short.
maybe if you added a little more like what you wear and where you were raised. stuff like that.