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Artemis "Rhyme" Entreri

Started by ~Harry Potter~, November 14, 2009, 02:25:06 PM

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~Harry Potter~

((I updated his physical description, personality, and history to make room for the creation of Artemis.  Reposted this since it is too long for a single post and had others people's post in my original which would have meant I had 3-5 posts in the middle of his bio.))

Name:Artimis Entreri
Nickname:Rhyme
Age:17
Date of Birth:October 12
Homelands:Gonlac
Race:Human
Class:Songcaster
Final:
Cosmic Screech
Rhyme's ability to manipulate his vocal cords is brought to its greatest potential in this move.  Rhyme is able to hit a note so high it rivals the power of a banshee's scream.  Though the move cannot cause a person instant deaf from fright like a banshee can it can cause heavy damage and most likely rupture a person's eardrums through sonic damage.

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Parents
Mother:Elandil Entreri
Father: Prometheus Gale
Siblings:
Sister:Alina Gale--12
Brother:Lucas Entreri 8
Sister:Samantha Gale--12
Other Relatives
Other random people such as Uncles, Aunts, Cousins, but nobody of great importance.  
Other Relationships:
None at the moment but open to any offers for a boyfriend

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{Weapon Information}
Baton of the Orchestra
A long rod of redwood about one foot in length.  The rod is polished to a high shine, so bright you can see yourself in it if you look close enough.  Burnt into the rod there is s small inscription "Listen close enough and your hear music anywhere."
This Baton gives Rhyme more control over his powers, especially his ribbon style attacks.  Which, instead of coming from his fingers and hands it comes from the end of the baton and acts like a ribbon rod such as you would find in rhythmic gymnastics.
Enchanted Kunai
Ten metal kunai knives with sharp edges and rings to hold on to with.
These kunai will transform themselves into a shield if the user is holding them all together when hit with a direct attack.

{Armour Information}
Ceremonial Robes
Blue and White robes with green trim that Rhyme almost never wears.  They are made out of a thick felt like fabric that is warm and heavy for a robe.  All over the robes there are lines of music and notes stitched into the fabric.  The robes go down to 3 inches above his feet so he doesn't trip.
This robe has many pockets which he can keep a large amount of stuff within, even though the pockets are very small.  Also, the robes give him the ability to "see" musical notes which makes his powers work much easier.  

{Accessory Information}
MP3 Player
It is a small electronic music storing device.  It is small, able to fit within your hand easily and is an off white in color.  The screen will light up in a pale blue light with black letters when a button is pushed.  Coming from the MP3 player is a set of ear buds the same color as the player.
Rhyme's MP3 player is enchanted to never run out of power, to have an infinite amount of space for music, and will automatically update itself whenever it or Rhyme learns a new song.  It is also connected with Rhyme's mind so it can work with just a thought.
Microphones of Many Miles
A small ear piece that can go within the ear with a thin but strong metal wire that goes down to microphone near the mouth.
The user will give one of the two microphones to his or her favorite person and they will be able to communicate clearly from any distance.

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{Physical Description}
Rhyme is of medium height and is slim.  He has bright purple hair that sticks out everywhere on his head and deep purple eyes.  His skin is pale in nature but is normally always tanned.  Rhyme normally wears tee-shirts with a band on them with a leather jacket over it.  He also wears faded ripped jeans that show off his knees and ankles.  Lastly he wears the classic style of band shoes, pure black and simple though easy to walk in.  He normally doesn't wear much jewelry though he does have a stud in his ear.  

Artemis is a much darker version of Rhyme.  Though they are the same person, when Artemis takes control Rhyme's appearance can drastically shift.  His hair and eyes shift to a darker shade of purple and his hair style seems to get more orderly.  Instead of sticking out all over it is more flat and goes long over one eye hiding it from easy view.  His shirt will normally shift to a heavy metal or screamo band which Rhyme would generally hate and his coat would gain a lot of metal chains.  Speaking of metal, when Artemis is in control he gains much more facial jewelry.  He gains three more studs in each ear, two studs in his left eyebrow and a ring in his lip.  

{Personality}
Through all the trauma of his past Rhyme is terribly unstable though at a first glance even psychically it is not apparent.  Within his mind there are not one but two minds in conflict with each other for control.  There is the rational mind of Rhyme and the...not so rational mind of Artemis.  Artemis was there at first to be his protector, to take on what Rhyme could not handle but he soon twisted into all the negative emotions of Rhyme without any of the positive to buffer it out.

Rhyme can be very sweet but easily depressed when certain parts of his past are mentioned.  Though there are many skeletons in his closet he does not let these get to him on a daily basis unless dragged out by conversation. Rhyme could be described as a normal mind.  He laughs like a normal teen does and really loves modern music.  Though because of all the drilling he had to go through be a mage he is very analytical and far from stupid.  

Artemis in contrast is very dark.  He easily gets amusement from the destruction of property and the fear of others believing life needs to be shook up every now and then.  He, in contrast, is straight and loves to flirt around to make Rhyme cringe.  He is everything Rhyme is not, he is loud and outspoken and not one to hold back a crude insult.  Through all of this though, the base of his creation, as a protector, is still there.  He teases Rhyme all the time though he still has the mindset that he is the only one that should do so.  He will protect Rhyme to the very end and not just because they are sharing a body though they have two very different ideas on how that protection should be done.  
They say trust is like a mirror, you can fix it if its broke
But you can still see the crack in your reflection

~Harry Potter~

#1
{Background}
Rhyme lived a mix lifestyle within his home.  His mother, Elandil was a powerful and famous bard, she was free spirited and a loving mother though a bit naïve of the evil of others.  His father, Prometheus, was a strict, bumbling mage, who normally couldn't spend enough time away from his books to spend time with his family.  Even though his presence wasn't directly with the family, it did cast a shadow over them, removing most of the fun their mother produced.  

Rhyme is the oldest of the 4 children.  His brother Lucas is the youngest at the age of 8, while his sisters Samantha and Alina are twins at the age of 12.  Alina and Samantha are great musical artists, they got the bard nature from their mother.  They can play nearly any instrument right after picking it up.  Rhyme though, did not get this talent.  Even though his mother tried to help him he could not pick up the skill of playing instruments.  However, at a young age he did have a knack for conducting, so his mother taught him how to do that.  Rhyme grew up in a fairly happy home, conducting while his sisters played.  

As the oldest child within the family, Rhyme was the first child at 14 to come into his powers.  They first manifested while conducting his sisters, as he worked the baton, a yellow line of musical energy began to leak from it.  The energy took the form of lines of music as it fell, the exact music his sisters were playing, note for note.  This unique ability came from the mixing of the two magics, the ancient magic of the music from his mother and the art of the arcane magics from his father, all came together to make this new unique form of music/magic.  

When he got his powers, his father and mother began to train him in how to use it.  Unfortunately for Rhyme, his mother could not help much since his power did not come from musical instruments or singing.  She had to leave him with his strict father to learn.  His father made Rhyme do many strenuous activities to strengthen his body and mind.  This, he was told, would give him better focus, and let him use his powers more.  This really didn't help, and this just tortured him and made him more disciplined, effectively taking him away from the fun his power can draw from.  

Soon though his father got more and more strict and finally ended up locking Rhyme in the basement with the words, "Magic will set you free."  Rhyme spent a week down in that basement with only water to drink before he finally passed out from fatigue.  When he woke up he found himself in his bed and his father with a broken nose.  His father never said how he broke his nose though he never looked at Rhyme the same way again.  

After that moment his father refused to train him anymore.  This as well as his father looking over his shoulder all the time when Rhyme was around created a large rift between the pair that pretty much removed any semblance of a father son relationship.  

During this time, a dark cloud drifted over the lives of the family.  It happened to be that Prometheus was not getting all that he wanted from his wife and started to sample the fruits of his children.  The change started slowly.  Alina started to act more and more mature as the trauma aged her mind.  Sam in contrast changed from her normally loud and happy self to a dark, brooding, silent child.  Elandil tried to figure out what was wrong with Sam but could not crack the child's depression.  Then suddenly, one day, Sam left to go take a walk in the forest and came back totally happy again.  Though this was not the happy of before but of when she was only six years old.  

Nobody but Rhyme knows this but he was the cause of this sudden change.  He followed his sister into the forest hoping she would tell him what was wrong but stumbled upon her singing a modern song.  It was all about taking away the pain and going to a secret place.  As Rhyme listened to her sing he wished from the deepest parts of his heart that this song would come true.  With a burst of magic that left him unable to move for many minutes his dream came true.  Later Rhyme would realize this was the first Song Spell he cast.  

The next week though, Rhyme discovered why the twin girls were acting so strangely in the worst possible way, and afterwards was cursed with being unable to even correct the problem.  One night Rhyme was getting a drink from the kitchen when he heard activity coming from the girl's bedroom.  This was not uncommon in the past since the girls would at times stay up all night arguing about music or other things.  He decided to be nice brought the girls mugs of hot chocolate.  When he opened the door he was met with the sight of his father raping his sisters.  With what must have been an audible snap Rhyme's mind finally broke in two creating what would later be called Artemis.  

Rhyme woke up the next morning far away from his home with no memory of what happened or even what he saw.  As he tried to get back to his house he found that the barrier they had that prevented people from wondering to the magic house was also blocking his passage.  Outside the range of the barrier he found a note against the tree that said: "Get out of here and never come back.  You are a menace and no son of this family."  It was clear who wrote it since the barrier was one of the few works of magic his dad did right.  And since the barrier was controlled by him, Rhyme couldn't do a thing about it unless he actually learned some magely magic.  Because of this he decided to wonder, hoping to eventually come across something that could help.  

As he traveled Rhyme practiced with his powers.  He learned that most of the power came from the emotions of the song.  If they were about things he really had a connection with the power that came from it was much stronger.  He also learned that his power pretty much came in two forms, energy and spellcasting.  As energy he could shape the power into orbs, beams, and ribbons that looked like lines of music.  He liked the ribbons most since they most resembled his musical heritage.  The spellcasting he learned, pretty much made what the song was about come real.  The bad thing is, for most of the songs it took the whole song uninterrupted for the spell to come true, but, for some of the smaller changes it didn't take the whole song.  He also found out, purely by accident, that, if he tried hard enough he could imitate any person's voice he wanted.  This was kinda odd to him but he just chucked it up to how the powers of his parents mixed.  It was also around this time that he finally accepted that he was gay.  He never looked at the bar wenches when he want to an inn though he always had to turn his head when he passed a blacksmith or other craftsmen with his shirt undone.  

After a year of wondering around the country where he lived, working and using his powers to get money for lodging and food.  After a year a letter from the school arrived at the Inn he was staying at, and he finally knew which way to go to get some training and maybe eventually get home.    

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What Are Your Character's Flaws?
His biggest one is Artemis himself though he has many flaws of the average teen.  
What Are Your Character's Likes?
Most types of music.  
What Are Your Character's Dislikes?
Random jumbled noise with no pattern or reason.
What Are Your Character's Fears?
One day becoming deaf

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They say trust is like a mirror, you can fix it if its broke
But you can still see the crack in your reflection