Harry Potter Limerick

[.:~*Shuiliya*~:.]

This was for English whilst we were doing our poetry unit.  A Harry Potter Limerick.... *sigh*  I'm pathetic!  Well, here be it!

A spell, a wand and a Dark Lord
Keeps Hary Potter not so bored.
Although his home life sucks,
At Gringotts he's got bucks!
Those darn Death Eaters are some major horde.

lol.  I know, the last line doesn't exactly fit, but nothing else came to mind!

[Gengi]

*laughs*

Good job Shuibee! :D
It's kinda humorous! I like it!
^.^

[.:~*Shuiliya*~:.]

 ;D  Yay!  Someone likes it!  It's supposed to be humorous!  It's a limerick!

[DokkenSuite]

I'll try to help you with the last line if you like.

[.:~*Shuiliya*~:.]

Really?!  That would be terrific!  Just remember that the last line needs 8-10 syllables and the last word has to rhyme with 'bored'. XD XD  DDPC you are so sweet!

[Kaeli]

cool limerick shui...I can't write any kind of poetry, we just finished a poetry unit in school too though...I struggled through it!

[.:~*Shuiliya*~:.]

I used to love poetry.  I even took summer school classes on it!  It's almost second nature to think of things like that now...  ;D

[Gengi]

.....And one day he might defeat the Darl Lord.

Is that a good ending?

[.:~*Shuiliya*~:.]

Naw... Dark Lord and Dark Lord rhyme, but it's way to.... the same.

[*~*Hermione*~*]

hows this 1:
                     
                        Harry Potter has a scar
                        Upon his 4head
                        It was put there by tthe Dark Lord
                        Whos name should not be said

[.:~*Shuiliya*~:.]

thats cute!

[DokkenSuite]

Good one.I'm still thinking.

[*~*Hermione*~*]

Why,thank U ;D ;D ;D

[Prami]

Hey, I made one up just now! Okay, it is:

He's over 700 years old,
Dumbledore is very bold
he is my hero
and he doesn't sneer-o
and that's all there is to be told

[.:~*Shuiliya*~:.]

heeheehee!  ;D  Thats cute!  And you just made it up?