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A Small Story 2

Started by Ginny Weasly, March 28, 2005, 09:26:08 AM

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darkangel


Ginny Weasly

Thanks guys, I appreciate it. I'm typing some more now, so I should have it posted by Monday at the most.
My motivation
An oath I've sworn to defend


My dedication
To all that I've sworn to protect
I carry out my orders
With not a regret

_Lavender_

A new age. | A New definition. | A new life.
Hi. My name is •Lavender•

Ginny Weasly

Ginny woke up, her stomach was doing flip-flops. She turned and looked at Conan, who was laying there with his mouth slightly open. She could hear his breath coming and going, so he was okay.  She slipped out of bed and pulled a robe over herself. At three in the morning it was pretty cold. She walked out of her room and stepped softly down the hall to Nathan's room. Nate had one arm off the bed and was snoring lightly. He murmured something about flying pigs and turned over. Ginny continued down the hall, her sense of trouble heightening. Alisha was fine. Her toys were falling off the bed and she slept still. Ginny's heart jumped into her throat. That left one more room. Ginny ran down the hall to Kyle's room. He wasn't in his crib. Ginny screamed and feet were heard running down the hall. Conan came to the door.

"What's wrong, Gin?" he asked before sliding to a stop.

"Kyle! Kyle he's gone! My baby's gone! I can't find him!" Ginny was getting hysterical. She hadn't added a tracker in Kyle's mind yet, he was too young, and now she regretted it. She couldn't find any trace of him with what little she could use and her hysterics were shutting down her psychic powers. Nathan came out of his room, and joined his parents, just as Conan's parents came running down the hall. Conan grew pale.

"Are you sure?"

"Of course I'm sure, you idiot! Kyle is gone!" Ginny was screaming and crying. Conan put his arms around her and she hit him. She went to Kyle's empty crib and picked up his blanket, sat in the rocking chair and cried. Somebody said something about what they should do.

"No, leave her be. Who ever took Kyle wants something, and I don't think Ginny can deal with that now. Just let her sleep." Ginny heard Conan say.

Ginny opened her eyes to Nathan and Alisha's faces.

"Mummy? Are you okay?" asked Alisha, crawling into her mothers lap. Ginny didn't make a sound as she ran a hand through Alisha's red hair. Nathan gave his mother a worried look and sat on the floor beside her chair.
   Minutes later, Conan came into the room. His eyes looked tired and his hair and clothing was rumpled. Nathan looked up then stood. He pulled his sister from the room, giving his father a worried look. "Come on Alisha. Lets go get some breakfast."

"Are you okay?" Conan knelt in front of Ginny.

"Yeah. We have to find him Conan."

"I know baby. We will. Don't worry."
My motivation
An oath I've sworn to defend


My dedication
To all that I've sworn to protect
I carry out my orders
With not a regret

Ginny Weasly

Oh, I love you all to! Lol! I'm so alone!  ::) ;D
My motivation
An oath I've sworn to defend


My dedication
To all that I've sworn to protect
I carry out my orders
With not a regret

darkangel


Fayah Tirina


;D woah!!! awesome story!!!  please keep going!!! *begs* you have a great start!!!
email me if you want some ideas!!! here's my email address: stocking93@yahoo.com  ;D
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mamabiscuit

I think people don't reply coz it's a bit confusing Just a constructive critism But i loved it Please don't hate me! :-[
J K Rowling IS THE BEST! J K ROWLING IS THE BEST!

Ginny Weasly

I don't hate you! I'm glad someone finally told me what I was doing wrong! Lolz. Finally! Anyways, I'll try to make it a bit more simple. Thanks you guys.
My motivation
An oath I've sworn to defend


My dedication
To all that I've sworn to protect
I carry out my orders
With not a regret

Ginny Weasly

Okay, I know it's short but please, any replies are welcome, even to say you don't like it!

As Ginny and Conan talked about what to do in Kyle's room, down in a small hideaway under the entrance hall and young man stood smirking at Kyle. He picked the baby up.

"They've taken her away. Now they'll know what it's like to have your child taken away. Won't they my little prince?" he set Kyle down on a small mattress. He pulled on a servant  outfit and smoothed his hair. "I'll show them they can't take away Hope without giving something up." He smiled at Kyle.

Up in the dinning room, Hope suddenly shuddered. She set down her cup and sighed. Nathan, who had drug Alisha down there looked up.

"Are you cold, Hope?"

"Uh, no. But uh...something's not right. Besides the fact that your brother is missing." She answered him. Alisha looked up and nodded. She was smiling.

"There's a man here." Alisha smiled at Hope. She had known this for a while, after all she had inherited Ginny's power to see the future. Nathan looked at his sister and Hope, bewildered.

"Alisha," he said slowly, "do you know where Kyle is?"

"Yup, sure do." Alisha grinned at her brother, who stood up quickly.

"Then why didn't you tell us!" He practically screamed. Alisha frowned at him while Hope shook her head.

"Cause nobody asked me." Alisha retorted back.
My motivation
An oath I've sworn to defend


My dedication
To all that I've sworn to protect
I carry out my orders
With not a regret

Fayah Tirina

????? thatwas kinda weird... no offence just my opinion  :) don't be angry.. just my opinion
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Ginny Weasly

Yay! At least you read it and replied! I know, I'm going to clear it all up in a bit, and try to wierd it down  :P lolz
My motivation
An oath I've sworn to defend


My dedication
To all that I've sworn to protect
I carry out my orders
With not a regret

Ginny Weasly

Gah, I'm losing my thoughts on this, but I gotta finish, cause I never finish anything.

"Shh!" squeaked Hope, as the three children stood pushed against the wall. Someone walked past and Hope led the way into the hall. Nathan watched as the two girls went automatically to the front hall.

"Why that way?" He asked, quietly. They gave him a look and began searching the wall for some kind of door opener. Nathan leaned against the wall watching them. Someone grabbed his shoulder.

"Getting a bit nosey, aren't you kids?" sneered a voice. Nathan yelled as the floor seemed to disappear beneath him and the girls, dropping them into the secret hideaway there. Nathan  landed on the floor, a few feet away from Hope. Alisha, however had landed on a mattress. As the passage closed above them, Alisha let out a small shriek.

"It's Kyle" She said, gasping. She picked up her baby brother and hugged him tightly.
My motivation
An oath I've sworn to defend


My dedication
To all that I've sworn to protect
I carry out my orders
With not a regret

_Lavender_

Please keep going Gin! :-*
A new age. | A New definition. | A new life.
Hi. My name is •Lavender•

Xaver

#29
This is great! -notes the characters, and says 'OH'- lol :P . I get more of what is going on now, LOL. Keep going please! ;D

p.s - I read this when I was guest, a few times, to understand Conan. That guy, is he the King of Romania.

I like the writing! Go on
"Odi et amo."



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