Rise of Lestrange

[LordBlaZe]

((k im so bored right now so im gonna improvise a story, it'll probably suck but just read it for fun))

Finally, he was out, out in the open and free at last. Free to rage his chaos against the muggles and the wizarding world. He was the nephew of Bellatrix Lestrange. At the time of voldemort's final death he was starting his schooling. Ofcourse he wouldn't go to the mudblood filled school of Hogwarts. He was taught by old death eaters and dark wizards alike. Unlike lord Voldemort he was heartless. Completely heartless. Without any hesitation what so ever. He lived for killing and that's what he did best. He wasn't the greatest wizard but he was smart. He could plot anything, and could finish any1. He also used to respect his aunt, Bellatrix, but after she was killed by a low life blood traitor, he only laughed. She hesitated and that's why she fell. He had no fear in killing and would do what ever it would take to build an army to bring down the ministry and rule the magical world. No one would stop him, especially no one with the name of Potter. He swore it, he would rather die by a muggle then a Potter.

((lol hope you like it, it's pretty bad though i know, ill continue it if you guys like it))

[LordBlaZe]

((here's another part i thought of))

A great feeling swept over him. He was living his life's dream. He had finally become an official Auror. It was truly a brilliant day for him, the minister of magic, Kingsley, had personally talked to him after he had become an Auror. But that wasn't anything new to him. He had known Kingsley for a while now and he enjoyed his company. A good sense of humor and a brilliant artillery of spells makes any wizard impressive, and the minister was no exception. Blaze was now walking down diagon alley, it was a few days before school would start for children but he wondered what was the need for Aurors' these days. With Voldemort long gone and the final death eaters locked away in Azkaban, the only other criminals were simple, low-life thieves. He had heard rumors of a relative of the Lestrange regaining some power but he was unheard of in these parts of England and was definitely no problem for the ministry. Yes, life was good. He was currently going to gringotts to retrieve some gold until suddenly he heard a crash behind him. Then some a screem and a yelling man. He turned to his surprise and saw too men with hooded capes and a fancy L design on their chests smashing into Burgain and Botts(im not sure how you spell it). He wasn't on duty but an Auror was always ready. He whipped out his wand and witnessed something sick. The taller of the two raised his wand and used the killing curse to murder the women at the front desk. "D@mn" thought Blaze and sprinted into the shop. "Stupefy" he though and the killer was smashed into the back wall unconscious. The second man turned and yelled "Crucio" but blaze rolled to the left, about to yell Stupefy but behind him he heard the words "Avada Kadavara". Time slowed down for him, his head was half turned and from the corner of his eye he could see an ill faced man with an evil grim pointing his wand at him. Green light smashing out from the tip. He would be dead in a millisecond and he knew it. Time regained speed and the light thundered upon him. He heard a voice murmur "defendo" and everything went black...

((lol, i couldn't really let you guys say anything on it before because i barely had put anything down, hope you like it so far, tell me if i should continue. I have some good ideas but theres no point in writing if no one is enjoying it, would love some response lol))

[harrypotterfan:)]

((OMG....another fan fiction writer....LOL...continue please....I love it so far ;D ))

[LordBlaZe]

((k))

but im gonna think about it this time lol. I'll post it back later

[LordBlaZe]

 "what happened, i came here as soon as i heard that an Auror was hit by the killing curse, where is he?" demanded Kingsley
"calm down minister, he is ok, i will explain to you and the rest what happened as soon as he regains consciousness" said the nurse.

Pain, everywhere, for a few seconds that's all that Blaze could feel. Then he slowly opened his eyes and saw his friends and fellow aurors. "ugh, what happened" asked Blaze.

The nurse fled in "Excuse me all, but you must leave for now i must talk to the patient, privately"
"We're not goin blimey anywhere" said Ronald Weasely. "what ever you say to him, your gonna have to say to us"
"very well then" said the nurse, a little annoyed. She turned to Blaze and said "You were shot at by the killing curse but lucky for you a young man tried to deflect the curse with Defendo (i made this spell up, i think lol, it blocks of spells and curses)"
"WHAT!! was i hit??" exclaimed blaze.
"let me finish!" said the nurse. "As i was saying, you got very lucky. The defense spell knocked off the killing curse right as it hit you. You were hit by the intention of the curse but not the curse it self. We call it essence. As the curse did not fully reach your body but the essence of it did. Think of it as a super stunning spell. You will feel a lot of pain for the next few hours but drink your medicine and you can leave in a few days"
"wow, well thats a relief!" said Hermione Weasely, Ron's wife.
"Yes but almost 25 innocent lives were taken there, what are we going to do, who were they, we have no information at all" mumbled Dean Thomas, half confused.
"WHAT? 25 lives by those 3 men" said Blaze in shock.
"Please! This isn't the time for discussion, I propose the order get back together, obviously something is going on. Me and Ginny will set up a location and inform you all. I don't want to say much more, we should all be happy that no more were killed, let's go everyone. Get your rest Blaze" said Harry Potter. Blaze always admired him, a born leader he thought.

After a few hours he started to think. 25 lives just because he failed to stun merely 3 men. He felt sick and useless. Although he was a new Auror he was a fairly talented wizard. It was bad enough the lady at the front counter was killed but because of his lack to act 24 more had died. Above all that he had almost been killed. He promised that after he got back in good health he would practice his magic more and maybe learn some new tricks. He felt tired, sad and excited. "wow" he though the Order of the Phoenix, together again. His eyes felt droopy and he stumbled into a deep and long sleep.

((yea yea i know this part was a little boring, lol, but it was necessary. Don't worry the next one will be more actiony, lol. Hope you guys are liking it so far.

[harrypotterfan:)]

She turned to Blaze and said "You were shot at by the killing curse but lucky for you a young man tried to deflect the curse with Defendo (i made this spell up, i think lol, it blocks of spells and curses)"

((isn't it difindo or defindo?))

[harrypotterfan:)]

((anyways....Blaze continue....don't think of me as rushing you but encouraging you to write more ;D ......LOL))

[LordBlaZe]

k lol thxs ill post more later

[harrypotterfan:)]

((okay....I'll be waiting....I'm taking place of those that aren't on these days....))

[LordBlaZe]

((haha lol, i see your posts more than any1s))

[harrypotterfan:)]

((I'm going to be gone when Sirius, Sarah, Devon, Ginny and other people decide to come on more often....because then you and Jessie would be lonely ;D ))

[LordBlaZe]

((umm... thank you :-\lol))

[N.Black1753]

((Hey, you wanted me to comment--very interesting storyline! I wish I knew the nephew's name...

A bit of constructive criticism--try to separate your writing into visible, logical paragraphs (on here you have to skip a line between them), and don't use numbers (1,2,3,) but rather the full words for them unless they have three or more syllables. Don't be angry at me for saying that, but those are tips to help make your writing more readable and understandable for your, well, readers! Do post more...this is quite interesting...))

[LordBlaZe]

k thxs. I would write more proper but i dont have good writing skills, just good ideas

[N.Black1753]

((Don't worry, all it takes is a little practice! :) ))