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Rise of Lestrange

Started by LordBlaZe, August 7, 2007, 04:02:41 AM

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Ginny Weasly

Very good job, considering your making it up as you go. I can never do that. Which reminds me...I have to work on mine.
Anyway, your writing skills will get alot better with more practice. It doesn't have to be perfect, but if you want people to respect you as a writer, I suggest you try.

It is really interesting.
My motivation
An oath I've sworn to defend


My dedication
To all that I've sworn to protect
I carry out my orders
With not a regret

harrypotterfan:)

((LOL...yeah Blaze....continue....we're all waiting....LOL ;D ))
Never argue with an idiot. They'll only bring you down to their level and beat you with experience.

some people wonder what my real name is....it's Faith.....don't make fun of it please=]

dobby888

VERY NICE!!!! me likey!!!! haha lol!!! i had to!! but  im writing a fan fiction to!!! although its not as good as yours plz still read it!!! its called..... uhm...wel i forget what its called but someone should know!!!! if you know the name of my fan fiction... then tell these people!!!! thx!!! xoxo!!

LordBlaZe

srry guys i've been super busy. School hasn't even started but i play a lodda soccer lol ;D A gotta show stopper for you all so keep reading. I'll post later today or tomorrow... promise
Ten Percent Luck
Twenty Percent Skill
Fifteen Percent Concentrated Power Of Will
Five Percent Pleasure
Fifty Percent Pain
One Hundred Percent Reason To Remember The Name

harrypotterfan:)

oh I see....well you better post tomorrow....LOL
Never argue with an idiot. They'll only bring you down to their level and beat you with experience.

some people wonder what my real name is....it's Faith.....don't make fun of it please=]

LordBlaZe

#20
(here you go)

Blaze entered the room, Ron and Hermione were already seated. Many of the other members had also just arrived and many were new, like him. It was three months after he had been impacted by the killing curse's essense. He felt much better now and he had also touched up on his magic. He had visited Harry Potter for a while. Harry was Head of the Department of Auror's. He had taught him a few new tricks to be used at sticky situations and also Ginny had taught him an advanced Reducto spell and served him a mighty fine dinner. He loved the Potters family, they were so warm and friendly. After that he had ventured to Ron Weasely. They had become good friends now. He talked to Hermione Weasely, she was probably one of the most capable wizards he knew. She gave him several books on advanced spells and more. He had become friends with only Bill Weasely after he had graduated, meeting him just casually at a pub. Bill invited him to his house and he had then met all of the family. The friendship tightened as Blaze turned into an Auror and was in the same squad as Harry.

Soon everyone had arrived and was seated. The last to enter were Kingsley, the minister himself, and ofcourse Harry and Ginny Potter. They had elected Harry to be leader of the new Order of the Phoenix and this was their first meeting. Harry didn't waist a second and with a loud voice, started his speech. "welcome all, new members and old friends, you are all know members of the Order of the Phoenix. We all know why we are here so let me get straight to the point. The mysterious Lestrange family member had been confirmed to be William Lestrange, thanks to the ministry we know have some information on him. He was orphaned at birth but was taken in by some mysterious family member, for some reason he is now recruiting dark wizards to do his bidding. They have attacked once at diagon alley, once near hogsmead, twice at the ministry and a large attack at the residents of Godric's Hollow. They seemed to be a petty criminal organization but they have become more powerful and more deadly over the 3 months. Before anything else goes wrong i suggest a squadron of the Auror's round up all of our magical creature's allies. It would be wise to start off with the giants---

"Interesting point Harry but do you really believe that this Lestrange person has already recruited magical creatures, it is preposterous, not even Lord Voldemort could have done that so fast. Really Harry is this necessary," said Hermione.

"Yes it is, I would rather be safe then unsure. What is the harm in it anyways. We take hagrid and a some auror's to talk to the giants. Hopefully they will help us if we need it." replied Harry, really selling his idea.

"Then it's settled, we'll all go to the Giant's and round up as your sayin Harry" said Ron, excited as usual.

"No, i will take my squad of Auror's and Hagrid to talk to the giants, this isn't anything huge, we just want to make sure we have one of the strongest race's of magical creature's on our side" Harry looked stern and sure. Nothing would change his mind. Him, Blaze, Luna Lovegood, and three other Auror's would escort Rubeus Hagrid to convince the giants to fight for their side if they ever needed help. That was the end of the meeting...
(there are two parts to this chapter, i don't feel like typing more so ill post it in a few hours or so)
Ten Percent Luck
Twenty Percent Skill
Fifteen Percent Concentrated Power Of Will
Five Percent Pleasure
Fifty Percent Pain
One Hundred Percent Reason To Remember The Name

dobby888

ooooh i like it!!!!! me likey!!!!lol!!! btw I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!! ;D ;D ;D keep writing!!!!

harrypotterfan:)

((I like it.....as I said to Jessie....no pressure.....LOL....just keep on writing the story....))
Never argue with an idiot. They'll only bring you down to their level and beat you with experience.

some people wonder what my real name is....it's Faith.....don't make fun of it please=]

LordBlaZe

(k this is the end of this chapter, keep in mind im writing as i go lol, oh and some of the spells are made up, their aren't enough real spells to have an intense duel and stuff, Enjoy!)

Knock! Knock "Er who's there, ima busy at de moment" said a voice from behind the door.

"Hagrid, it's me, Harry" said Harry Potter standing with his squad of Auror's outside of Rubeus Hagrid's house.

"Oh My, is that you, blimey Harry didn't expect ta see ya here" said Hagrid as he opened the door. "come in come in"

The 6 ministry workers stepped into the small shack. "Hagrid we need some work from you, it's legal and safe, ofcourse" said Harry looking at his old friend.

"Anything harry, just name it" said Hagrid as he poured out some tea.

"Well we need you to talk to the giants for us, it's a complicated story, but if you could convince them to fight for us if we ever needed it, I would greatly help out the ministry," replied Harry.

"Ofcourse, i was going to visit my brother there anyways" agreed Hagrid. He would do anything for Harry after he had stopped Lord Voldemort. So after they all had some of Hagrid's tea they went outside and disapparated. They ended up near the town of the Giants. "well let me take ya all to the Giant King and other high authority members, i'm quite well known around here now" said Hagrid and led them down a path. Soon they were met with a large Giant. Blaze had never seen a giant and was baffled. They were huge, and strong. With them on their side they could destroy any enemy.

"Mgggrrr, Comee!!" mumbled the giant as he led the party to a large castle looking area. They walked into it and saw the so called Giant King. He was larger than the normal giant and seemed to speak quite good English for a giant.

"Why have ye walked over me lande?" said the King, his eyes bulging out.

"Honored King of Giants," started Harry, "we ask of you to consider becoming allies with the ministry of---

--"Enough" interrupted the King "Kill them ALL" said the King laughing horribly

"Grab hands" said Harry still calm. He tried to disapparate but it didn't work. A few giants were coming up to them with large clubs. Harry was confused, there was no way the giants could have performed the anti-apparate spell. The castle door burst open, a large giant yelled "SAVE POTTE" and he fully tackled one of the giants. Following him came a few more giants. Soon the giant's were going at each other with full force. Blaze pulled out his wand and acted fast. "Stupefy" he thought and the red light crashed into a giant. It didn't even budge the giant beast. He was about to try something else when about 10 men in dark cloaks appeared from the crowd of giants, all with fancy "L" shapes on their chests.

Green light was summoned from all of their wands, but the squad of Auror's had already cast their artillery of protego charms. Nothing was said, the fight started at once. Blaze and Jonathon (another Auror) dived out of the way. "Inferno Blazius" said Blaze and a giant fire ball crashed into one of the hooded men. Another two closed into them, it was a two on two. Green light flashed infront of Blaze twice. "Stupefy" he thought but the spell was blocked. Dark light soared upon Blaze, he ducked it and cried "Sectum Sempra" the first of the two cloacked men was cut on the shoulder, blood poured out like crazy. The second man waved his wand and a magical rope was tied around Blaze's neck, it got tighter and tighter. He couldn't move or breathe.

"I got you" cried Luna Lovegood, she removed the rope and stunned the man.

"Thanks Luna" said Blaze after some bloody coughs. He dived to the other side, "Incendio Maximus" said Blaze, a large fire appeared and caught the robe of a wizard. Everything was in rubble, giants falling everywhere, he saw the dark hooded man falling, they were no match for the Auror's. But they just kept coming almost like when one fell another re-appeared.

"Retreat, back to the village" cried Harry, all the Auror's started to run back casting defense spells on the way. The hooded men started to run at them. Blaze, being the last Auror to run murmured a phrase and thought deeply of his state. A large wall of fire was conjured between the auror's and the men, giving them a few more seconds to retreat. One of the larger giants came roaring, he jumped through wall of fire and sped up to the fleeing Auror's. Luna stepped forward, she casted a binding spell on the giant but the beast was too much. He broke free and smashed Luna out of the way.

"NOOO!!" yelled Harry, "Disapparate NOW, that's an order, i'll get Luna"

Blaze wasn't going anywhere without a hint of revenge, "Rapia Burvia" he cried and an almost net like fire wrapped around the giant. He roared in pain. The fire was dark magic and it would burn the giant until Blaze felt satisfied. He saw the other Auror's apparate with Hagrid and Harry running where Luna was, he closed his eyes, lifted the curse of the giant and apparated too... 
Ten Percent Luck
Twenty Percent Skill
Fifteen Percent Concentrated Power Of Will
Five Percent Pleasure
Fifty Percent Pain
One Hundred Percent Reason To Remember The Name

dobby888

*wow thats really good!!!!! keep going!!!!!!!

harrypotterfan:)

((OMG...what happened....LOL...Harry all of a sudden sounds like a Army general....retreat go back to the village....LOL....sorry keep on writing))
Never argue with an idiot. They'll only bring you down to their level and beat you with experience.

some people wonder what my real name is....it's Faith.....don't make fun of it please=]

LordBlaZe

lol well hes head of the departement of Auror's...he has to be
Ten Percent Luck
Twenty Percent Skill
Fifteen Percent Concentrated Power Of Will
Five Percent Pleasure
Fifty Percent Pain
One Hundred Percent Reason To Remember The Name

harrypotterfan:)

yes yes I know....okay now hurry up with the story.....LOL ;D ;)
Never argue with an idiot. They'll only bring you down to their level and beat you with experience.

some people wonder what my real name is....it's Faith.....don't make fun of it please=]

dobby888

yeah get a move on!!!!(fyi im goin to Valleyfair from 3-11ish today!!)

HermioneFan

((wow! You guys are good writers :D) I love the story so far.)