Battle

[dobby888]

*URGH!* Crista kicks the wall in frustration.  *She gets everything!!!* she screams beginning to tug on her loose strands of sandy blonde hair, causing more to fall into her reddened face. *Why do I care so much!!! Why(kick) do (kick) I (kick) CARE!!!!* with that she kicked the wall so hard, that it made a huge dent.  *Oh of course!!! This happens to me, why can't it happen to someone like her!!!! uh!!* She stormed out of the room walking  marching more like, down the hall gritting her teeth.

[uglycupcakes]

Good beginning but a little short. Mabye you should just write 1 or 2 and  instead of writing a little bit  on each on make a really long p ost that took along time? Mabye?
Ok. well see. you. soon.
Luvya :-*

[dobby888]

She wasn't watching where she was going, and he bumped right into HER. 

*Hey!!* said Malina in her cheery voice. 

*Don't...talk....to me*  Said Crista furious.  Then she thought ~man would I like to strangle her right out of that stupid mini skirt!!~ After Malina was down the hall Crista calmed down a little bit.  ~If I even touch her the school would kill me!! I mean, my family is sending me here so that my mind can be challenged.This is an all girls school.  An all CLIQUES school, if I do anything, someones bound to notice.~

She pushed her blue glasses back up her nose, because they had begun to slide down, and she adjusted her book bag on her arm.

[dobby888]

Crista took a deep breath and walked on to her next class.

~I'll show her.  I'll be better than anyone else here, and get all the friends, and leave stupid little Malina shivering on the sidewalk.~ Crista thought to herself.

She walked into her classroom, and sat down.  Her teacher, Mr. M, said *Well, Crista, you actually decided to come to class today!!* Crista had been skipping her classes, and was considering dropping out.  She had only attended classes a few times, at the beginning of the year when her parents were paying attention, and cared. All she had had to do was get a passing grade and she would be fine.  Now she would be perfect... shiningly, stunningly perfect.  It shouldn't be to hard... right?

The students began filing into the room and sitting down.  Dicie sat behind her, with some other girls.  They were Malina's followers.  They worshipped the ground she walked on.  *Well well well... look who finally decided to show up today!* Dicie said making everyone else snicker. 

Crista almost whirled around to punch her, but instead smiled sweetly and said *Why hello Dicie.* She turned back around as class started.