Strong Old Magic!

[fudge0604]

Come on! READ IT SOMEONE!

[LordBlaZe]

lol BUMP! wright more please

[fudge0604]

I don't know if i wanna write some more if you are the only one that have read it in a while!

[Kilynn]

im still not in it tho.

[uglycupcakes]

Nobodys gonna read if you don't write

[fudge0604]

yeah...

[fudge0604]

Albus was sitting in the common room. He was sitting and reading the book.
He was now in the second chapter: What is your element?.
He had read half of the chapter and was very sure that his element was Ice and cold.
But then he suddenly came up with a thought:Maybe if Ollivanders shop were taken on fire on that way? But then he read : Fire is an very hard element too control. Just some can control it but none has the complete control of an element.
Then he was done with that chapter. He turned the page and in a big title it said: Some easy practises!

Think of the element of yours and feel it into you. Take all your focus on the thing you are gonna
do. DO NOT LOOK AT ANYTHING ELSE UNNTILL THE LATER CHAPTERS WHEN INSTRUCTED!

He closed the book and went out from the common room going through the portrait of the fat lady.
He went too a abandoned class room. He got himself some water in a bucket and thought:  Here goes nothing....   He focused all his power and strenght on the bucket with water. He thought of that the water froze and in his mind he made his illusion clear. He collected all his frost and sent it against the bucket. Nothing happened. He stuck his finger into the bucket. He felt that the water was ice cold. He smiled too himself.

Suddenly the door opened and one that he had just learned the name of; Kilynn came into the room.
Next too her was Vanessa standing.

« What the heck are you doing here?» Kilynn asked rude.

« None of your buisness!» Albus said too her in the same tone.

Vanessa looked like she had nothing too do with it and whispered too Kilynn: «Lets go!»

« No way!» Kilynn whispered back.

Albus just walked out of the room. He closed the door behind him and walked down the corridor.
When he turned the corner he walked right into Cho. He was so suprised that he gave from himself a little scream.

« Sorry!» Albus said when he finally have got what has happened.

« Nothing Albus....» Cho answered.

Albus suddenly noticed that his book was lying on the floor. He grabbed it and took it under his arm.

« What is that?» Cho asked curiously.

« Nothing... Just an old book....» Albus said slowly.

He got on his feet and started too run against the common room before Cho has gotten a thng abaut anything..... ((Lolz.....))

« Wait Albus!» She shouted after some seconds but it was too late. Albus was long gone.

[Kilynn]

yeah im in it. Thank You Albus!
Good JoB!!!!

~Kilynn~

[LordBlaZe]

Bump, good job. Keep it up

[Ginny Weasly]

OK, I like reading it, but couldn't you use quotation marks (" ") around dialogue? It makes it alot easier to read. And anything written needs quotation marks or italicized.

[fudge0604]

I'm writing in open office.... There it isen't quotation marks....

[Ginny Weasly]

Um, don't you use a keyboard? They keyboard comes equiped with quotation marks and any program that doesn't have them is too old to use. Notepad (a program that come with every computer) uses them even.

[fudge0604]

hehe..... In the computer world i'm not that experienced.....

[Ginny Weasly]

I'm sucha nerd... :P

[fudge0604]

I think geek is the word..... lol...... ;)