Strong Old Magic!

[fudge0604]

Here is a bit more. I have nearly the rest here done. The next last part!
ENJOY!

Albus got better and better. In two moths he had finished the book.
But more and more mysterious fires started. Albus had started too count them and watch where they were started. It started in the ollivanders shop. Went north to a witch's house and went fourther and fourther north. One day he got to know that a fire had been down in Hogsmead.
I think Hogwarts is gonna be the next of the fires.... He thought quietly too himself one day.

[fudge0604]

REAAAAAAAAAADDDDDDDDDDDD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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read and make some commentaries (( I know the Spelling that i made wrong there....))

[Vanessa]

((the one time im it i sound like a total brat!!!! and are me and blaze together in this???))

[fudge0604]

Isen't it Kilynn i make look like a brat? You are the one that don't wanna make some trouble and yes i can make you and Blaze together in this....... More writing too me....Thank you Vanessa!
lol....

[Vanessa]

((lol good point... and thank you!))

write more!!!

[fudge0604]

Okay! But soon. I have some awsome posting with you and Natalie now and that is not often for me!

[LordBlaZe]

nice BUMP UP write more lol

[Kilynn]

O thanx guys!

Bump, write more!

[fudge0604]

Albus was walking around in the corridors. He thought too himself: Think i am gonna go back now. He turned next too a corner and in an secret passage. as he went in he suddenly saw Vanessa and Blaze standing there kissing.
They just suddenly looked at him.

" Woops!" He said and turned around.

" No wait Al...." Blaze said.

But Albus coulden't hear him because he was long gone again.((lolzar....))
As Albus was walking he saw out of the window. Then he suddenly saw that
the forest were on...... FIRE!
He got panic. Then he thought too himself:Calm down...Go and use your ice magic at the flames.

He ran down the stairs and out the great hall. He ran out and started running for real. When he reached the forest he suddenly saw a guy in front of him.
The guy raised his wand and said:

" Stupefy!"

Albus got down on the forest ground.
Then he was long gone this time also.((lolzar..... ;D))
The only thing he could feel were that he was been levitating away.
He forced himself too raise up and look into the forest. He was long into it.
Then he realized that the fire had been an illusion used on him too run against the forest. He tryed too look at his kidnapper but he could not do it.
He suddenly felt tired. Then he got unconscious.

[Ginny Weasly]

Try to work on your grammer a bit. Some of the sentences are wierd. But I understand it, so it's all good. Haha.

Keep going!

[fudge0604]

Well i am an eleven years old norwegian boy...
We have not had soo much Grammar yet... We started with the grammar last year and then i nearly diden't got anything! (( Is that an proper excuse?))

[Vanessa]

i started dieing of laugher about the me and blaze part lol

[Ginny Weasly]

Well i am an eleven years old norwegian boy...
We have not had soo much Grammar yet... We started with the grammar last year and then i nearly diden't got anything! (( Is that an proper excuse?))

Don't give me excuses, boy!
Lolz, I'm just joking.
Seriously, though, I love reading the story, you have some great ideas. The grammer thing is just to help me, a reader, understand some things better.

[fudge0604]

Hehe.....

[Lauren Eliabeth]

i will be in it too if you want me to be in it