I Write Sins Not Tragedies

[~Harry Potter~]

A currently unknown student walked the rolling hills of the Hogwarts grounds.  He walked with an odd gate to his step, like he was half dancing half walking.  He lips moved almost silently, singing under his breath.  The wind blew lightly from the lake, throwing up with it the smells of the water.  The wind disturbed the students purple locks slightly, and he pushed them out of his eyes. 

He shifted his shoulders slightly as he readjusted his black leather coat and shifted his knees as he pulled his sliding pants up a bit.  His pants were worn completely in the knees, though he refused to repair or get a new pair.  He also had a black t-shirt with "Fall Out Boys" on it. 

"Say a prayer but let good times roll.  In case God doesn't show.  Let the good times roll" he sang under his breath

[billy_1437]

Billy was sitting by an old tree trying to clear his mind by writing poems until he heard someone walking and sorta singing than Billy saw a guy walking and he gathered all his things and he just carried his poem book with him as he followed the guy for a little while trying to figure out how he could say hi and maybe mak a new friend or atleast someone to help him find his way back to the castle Billy looked up at the guy and saw his shirt so taking a chance billy walked up next to the guy "nice shirt man" said billy trying to act like he knew what he was doin

(you know that "Thnks Fr th Mmrs" is the title of that song)

[~Harry Potter~]

((Yea, but that was a better title))

The kid stopped singing softly and looked at the other boy with half lidded uncaring eyes.  It was how he looked at most people anymore, a neutral uncaring way brought on by his father. 

"Thanks" he said, with a tone of being half asleep, though he was wide awake. 

Rhyme didn't really know the kid, but he didn't know anyone at all really for that matter.  He just got sent here from the States so he didn't even get much of the language.  What were bangers?  And what was with everyone saying 'bloody?'  Britain was really weird.

((Why don't you try improving your RPing while you RP with me?  I can actually give you structure that most others won't, and then when you get better you can brag about it.  Also, watch grammar, I am not that good at it myself so I normally type it in a word file with spell check.))

((Here, this can help you.  1) What is your character thinking?  2) What does your character look like?  3) Why is your character there?  4) Why did your character just do what he did?  These and other questions can help you lengthen your post.  It comes with time though  And as you can see with mine, if you don't give much, you don't get much back and you get stuck with a bad 1 line RP))

[billy_1437]

((better))

[fudge0604]

Albus was sitting high up in a tree. He heard something belowhim and he looked down. There he saw two boys. Both hadn't he seen before.
Albus liked to sit in high trees. It maked him relax and just float away. Well.... I think I'm going down there to meet those guys... But I am way much younger... Albus thouhgt too himself. He took a little brown hair away from his face so that his sight could be better.
He quickly jumped down and landed on his feet. But it was a bit too much for his feet so he fell on his back.
He quickly got up again and approached the two boys. " Hi! I havn't seen you guys here before. What is your names?" With his regular voice.

[~Harry Potter~]

((Much better Billy, and truthfully it will come with time as you better understand your character.  But if you let yourself just post one liners...you learn nothing about your character and get stuck posting that short.))

Rhyme looked up at the boy, a bit uncomfortable around all the people.  His left foot went back, as he took a half step, weakening his general stance.  He was normally a very private person, brought up with a close nit family, he didn't see much of other people.  Even then his home life had challenges, his father was one of them, and mental scars still showed strongly in Rhyme's mind. 

"...um...I am Rhyme." he said, a small waver to his voice.

Too many people...WAY too many people his mind raced franticly.

[Noelle]

Noelle sat, reading her book peacefully. She heard people talking softly nearby and quickly glanced up from the pages. There was three boys talking. She hadn't met any of them before so she decided maybe it was best to just keep to herself. She flipped the next page, still eavesdropping on their conversation. She usually would have jumped up and sprinted over there to indroduce herself. Normally she would have been bubbly and outgoing. But nothing was really normal anymore. So she just sat there, letting the wind ruffle her dark brown locks.

[billy_1437]

Billy kinda jumped he wasnt excepting someone to just jump in front of them "im Billy Stevens um who are you?" Billy asked looking at the younger boy while he helped the kid up. Billy when the kid was up Billy looked around and saw a girl sitting down and what he thought reading ~i wonder who that is~ he wondered

[kira]

Kira walked over to the boys becaues she most likely fits there better."Hey i'm Kira you are.?"she said looking at the boy who she was standing next to ((I think your name is Billy)) ........she looked over to the girl and smiled with a little wave then went back to them.

[Noelle]

Billy kinda jumped he wasnt excepting someone to just jump in front of them "im Billy Stevens um who are you?" Billy asked looking at the younger boy while he helped the kid up. Billy when the kid was up Billy looked around and saw a girl sitting down and what he thought reading ~i wonder who that is~ he wondered

Noelle read Billy's thought's. "My name's Noelle." She said softly, her eyes not leaving her book. "And I'm guessing your Billy."

Her voice was soft as it carried though the wind, being just barely audiable. She fliped another page and slid in a blue bookmark. She pulled over her bag and slid the book into it. She put the brown bag onto her should and slowly stood up. She pushed a dark brown piece of hair behind her ear as she walked over. It was usually hard for her to express much emotion so you couldn't really tell that she was happy to be talking to others. She smoothed out her dark wash skinny leg jeans for they had pieced of grass stuck to them from sitting on the ground.

"Sorry about eavesdropping. It's a bad habbit."

[kira]

Kira looked over and thought *Hi I am Kira you are?* to Noelle

[iNinjuh]

Al had just finished at the library, and was wondering the hills of Hogwarts.
His black hair covered some of his eyes, swaying in the breeze, and his nose in yet another book he had borrowed from Madame Pince, the librarian, whom he had become very amiable with over the years he spent in there.

He suddenly spotted a group of about 4 or 5 people, and began walking towards them, curious.
One of them looked like Albus.
The others, he didn't know.

He stopped about 5 feet short of where they were.



[[ Hey Harry, do you mind if I could improve my RolePlaying with you? ]]

[kira]

Kira just stood there a diesided to walk away she thought every thing whould be differnt if she came here but she was wrong the people are loking write though her like she was just a big window and she didn't like that she started to get really mad about it but she just pulled her self together and walked off bumping billy in the shoulder as she walked by "oh.....sorry." she said in a kinda hushed tone sorta way . she went off behind a tree and her eyes started to teer up she didn't know why this was happening she bearly ever cryed the only time she did was when her old friends whould tell a really stupied jock.She finely looked up and saw a kid she has nerver seen befor walk out of the libray.

[~Harry Potter~]

Rhyme's eyes flashed around at the different people quickly.  Giving each a quick glance in slight terror.  He was really uncomfortable with so many new people.  Their voices, each different, tore into his brain through his sensitive ears.  Wincing slightly at the pain he finally answered everyone in turn. 

((RP Advice #2:  If there are more then 3 people in an RP, do not go too far past the one person or it makes it complicated to post.  It is easiest to go in a round robin style, unless the person does not post in a length of time.  Normally a day or more))

"I am Rhyme, nice to meet you Noelle and Kira" he said to them, forced and quick from near panic.

When he saw a girl begin to cry behind the tree, he focused his powers and a small voice whispered in her ear.  It was Rhyme's voice, though his lips didn't move.  It wasn't telepathy, he couldn't do that, but he was good with sounds. 

[Do you want to try to get out of here?  There are way too many people here]

[kira]

Kira just looked around not knowing who or what was talking to her *um who are you?* she said not knowing still.