Ally

[ally]

Name:Ally Bartemius
AGE:  15
Height 5'6
Appearance:long curly blonde hair, and bright green eyes, her eyes changed colors on different moods. 
RACE:white 
Parents: Lily Maxime and Alan Baremius 
Personality: lovable,sweet natured, and outgoing. 
Likes: party, talk to friends, and do magic
Dislikes:uh.... stuff
Power:telepathic
History: Her parents are both powerful wizards. She had a twin brother but was taken away when Ally was seven, she never saw him again. Ally and her brother were in seperateable. Her father turned onto Voldemorts side and became his follower. Ally was raised by her mother ever since then.

[LordBlaZe]

nice bio:P
could use some more detail but I like it none the less ;D

[Kilynn]

good bio!

[cody]

nice bio

[ally]

nice bio:P
could use some more detail but I like it none the less ;D

yeah i know i just didnt know what to put

[fudge0604]

This is not GREAT but good. You need to put in more details into every category.
This is a person. If your going to write a bio about yourself, wouldn't you put more into it?
Its ALOT more fun to read a bio that is descriptive, detailed and longer.

*ALBUS*

[ally]

yeah sorry bout that

[_-Casey-_]

read a few of the others and you'll get an idea about what to do thats what I did and mine came out to be okay

[ally]

okay ill do that

[KeKe p]

yeah good start you might want to read some of the other and you will come up with stuff to put donw once you post and get an idea of her by the way she acts and thing.....but good i do like it so far..

[ally]

k,k ill do it

[KeKe p]

ok i hope to get to now you more...

[walker08]

Hi. Nice bio. I'm new too. I hope we become good friends. :)

[ally]

lol, i also hope we become friends.

[lexip.13]

wow no offense but that kind of sucked. hope we can't be friends.