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Started by ChoChangHP118, May 23, 2008, 08:51:56 AM

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I loves YOUz

Aww so much a little ball can hold...
I wanna get back into this site..
My writing has gone way done hill since I left
and well I miss everybody!

harrypotterfan:)

Quote from: ChoChangHP118 on June  3, 2008, 09:13:43 AM
Creeper. That's all I've got to say.
Give it a few days.
I don't want to rush it all out at once...

lol....:P

pretty good....sorry I won't rush you....I just like to read stories that are DONE....lol...joking.....you can CONTINUE with your story now :D
Never argue with an idiot. They'll only bring you down to their level and beat you with experience.

some people wonder what my real name is....it's Faith.....don't make fun of it please=]

ChoChangHP118

Alright I'll add on some more because you guys are really good at replying!

"Don't make me hit you Chris! Get away from that! Don't touch it!" The silence that had surrounded Adrienne broke as AJ's voice once again came flooding through her mind. This time she did not scream but merely opened her eyes slowly. Before her were the same boys from yesterday, Chris and AJ. They wore the same clothes as yesterday and they showed the same expressions. AJ seemed tense and irritated as he stood staring at Chris who was bending over and examining the lime green bouncy ball. Adrienne sat for a moment before slowly reaching her hand toward AJ. Slowly but surely her fingers uncurled from a fist and she touched AJs bare foot. AJ jumped slightly as he peered down to Adrienne. He smiled at her like she was a butterfly on a flower before bending over so his face was next to hers. He knew what she wanted to do and before he could say anything Adrienne had slowly outstretched her soft palm and placed it on his cheek. Adrienne didn't know what she had expected to feel but what she did was no surprise, AJ was solid and human.
Hailey moved in her sleep. Slowly her body shifted in her slumber and she rolled to her left, rolling straight into Chris. Chris jumped as did Hailey as her face hit his leg. Slowly she opened her eyes as she peered up at Chris, "Not again!"
"What do you mean not again? We sensed hesitation before, did you think we were fake?" Chris said laughing at her slightly before leaning against the tree house wall beside him. "We've come again to check in on you both. How are you?"
Hailey paused for a moment and peered over at Adrienne who still had her palm on Aj's cheek. Realizing she was doing this she quickly pulled her hand back and smiled meekly to Hailey. "How are we?" Hailey repeated Chris's question staring at Adrienne. "How are we?" She said, her voice getting slightly higher. "How are we!" She turned back to Chris. "What do you care. Your the ones that left us!" There, she had said it. She had said the one thing she had been wanting to yell at Chris since the day he died. "You left us with no one but each other! How do you think we are?" Hailey didn't expect a response instead Aj replied.
"Hailey, calm down. Its not like he asked to leave!"
"That still doesn't mean its not his fault. He should have been more careful when he was driving! I blame him for that accident!" Hailey stared with a death glare towards Chris.
"Hailey, seriously just chill okay? Its not his fault. He didn't ask for it. Just let it go. There's no reason to be angry with the past." Adrienne said, hoping it would calm down Hailey, hating when she was like this. Chris stood, staring at Hailey, his eyes showing no emotion. Inside he was feeling betrayed, hated, and yet sorry for Hailey. She seemed to be so devastated but his death. He hated that his friend was hurting because of him. He swallowed and stared with desperate eyes towards AJ. AJ closed his eyes for a moment, not knowing what to say. He felt Hailey had a point in saying all of this but the truth hurt.
Hailey glared even more angrily at Chris, not thinking straight anymore. "Why did you leave us? I hate that you left us! You left Adrienne, you left me with no one!" Hailey continued. "I hate you." A single wet tear fell down her face. Adrienne began crying. She slowly raised her hand to AJ who peered down at her for a moment before taking hold of it. Adrienne squeezed it and didn't let go. A few minutes went by and this is how the four friends stood in the brightness that the boys had brought with them once more. Adrienne and AJ holding hands tightly, Hailey crying at Chris's feet, and Chris frozen in his place watching Hailey.
Slowly Chris swallowed hard and slid down the wall. In a moment he was next to Hailey's face. "I'm sorry," he whispered in her ear before staring into her eyes. "I'm so sorry-"
"No," Hailey said sniffing and wiping her eyes, "I'm sorry. I know its not your fault. I'm so sorry that I said all of that. I don't hate you. I just miss you so much"
Chris nodded slowly. "I know."
AJ squeezed Adrienne's hand before slowly letting it fall to her side once more. He walked over and stood next to Chris placing his hand on his shoulder. "The second truth: confession. Girl's you're at your second stage of getting over us." He nodded to them. "The first was yesterday morning, you both woke to unbelief. You didn't believe we had come. Tonight Hailey confessed how she felt about Chris leaving her. You have both reached the second out of three truth's,unbelief and now confession."
Chris nodded to Hailey before quietly sneaking his hand towards the bouncy ball. He grasped it in his left hand and slowly stood winking to Hailey, "Goodnight ladies." they said, AJ and Chris both faded into the air.

"You beleive that there is one God. Good! Even the demons believe that-and shudder."

                      -James 2:19

heyyy. greeeeeeat post in the court one!! -Ginny (A Classic just complimented me!)

Ginny Weasly

More! I command thee...only because I can bother you endlessly until you do!
My motivation
An oath I've sworn to defend


My dedication
To all that I've sworn to protect
I carry out my orders
With not a regret

I loves YOUz

I love it its sooooo sad and I'm happy but does that mean after the three they wont bealbe to come back...
I wanna get back into this site..
My writing has gone way done hill since I left
and well I miss everybody!

harrypotterfan:)

Quote from: Ginny Weasly on June  6, 2008, 08:23:56 AM
More! I command thee...only because I can bother you endlessly until you do!

lol....I will help as well.....trust me you better write more.....:D
Never argue with an idiot. They'll only bring you down to their level and beat you with experience.

some people wonder what my real name is....it's Faith.....don't make fun of it please=]

ChoChangHP118

Eek! Two raging girls after me! Yikes! *scurries away*
"You beleive that there is one God. Good! Even the demons believe that-and shudder."

                      -James 2:19

heyyy. greeeeeeat post in the court one!! -Ginny (A Classic just complimented me!)

I loves YOUz

#22
*stands and laughed then puts a water gun to your head and demands you write more!*
I wanna get back into this site..
My writing has gone way done hill since I left
and well I miss everybody!

ChoChangHP118

That's uncomfortable. *peers up at water gun pointed at his head.*
"You beleive that there is one God. Good! Even the demons believe that-and shudder."

                      -James 2:19

heyyy. greeeeeeat post in the court one!! -Ginny (A Classic just complimented me!)

I loves YOUz

*I'll do it she said and laughed*
I wanna get back into this site..
My writing has gone way done hill since I left
and well I miss everybody!

harrypotterfan:)

lol.....takes out a(n)...........................ICE CREAM CONE!
I'm hungry.....
Never argue with an idiot. They'll only bring you down to their level and beat you with experience.

some people wonder what my real name is....it's Faith.....don't make fun of it please=]

harrypotterfan:)

umm so are you going to start writing or are you asking for the wrath of my machete....lol....sorry bored and hyper
Never argue with an idiot. They'll only bring you down to their level and beat you with experience.

some people wonder what my real name is....it's Faith.....don't make fun of it please=]

ChoChangHP118

Tough crowd.

Hailey opened her eyes swiftly and sat up. She looked around as if expecting to see something there. Nothing was, just a warm sunlight pouring into the room. Adrienne was already awake as Hailey looked over at her. Adrienne's stared at the ceiling and she blinked before sighing and looking at Hailey. "There's no escaping that one," Adrienne said referring to last night's meeting with AJ and Chris. Slowly she received a nod of acceptance from Hailey.


Just a little bit for now sorry. I'll be back later to put a lot more. Believe me.

"You beleive that there is one God. Good! Even the demons believe that-and shudder."

                      -James 2:19

heyyy. greeeeeeat post in the court one!! -Ginny (A Classic just complimented me!)

I loves YOUz

I wanna get back into this site..
My writing has gone way done hill since I left
and well I miss everybody!

ChoChangHP118

I'm being forced

Once again the girls went through the day quietly.There parents told them that Chris's funeral would be held the following day at the same garden where AJ had been buried. Both Adrienne and Hailey agreed to meet again that night, not wanting to deal with death in their lives for at least one more night.
Night fell once more as Hailey arrived at the tree house once more climbing up the rope. She decided to make the canopy and bed before Adrienne got there.
Huffs of wind followed Adrienne as she made her way through the Brown Dear Forest to the tree house. She found Hailey finishing up on the canopy. "Did you hear about the funeral? Its going to be tomorrow," Adrienne said as she placed the pillows and blankets down. Hailey nodded to her not speaking. "Its supposed to be rainy tomorrow so I hope all goes well," Adrienne continued. "Then again with AJ the whether had been very rainy as well and we managed. So a little water won't-"
"Would you STOP!" Hailey screamed turning to Adrienne, her eyes angry. "Just stop talking about it. I don't want to have to think about tomorrow."
"Okay okay goodness Hailey!" Adrienne said offended and stepping backwards slightly.
"Look, I'm sorry. I just don't want to accept it yet I guess," Hailey said.
Adrienne nodded and crawled over to her and sat down, "I understand," she muttered softly as her bangs fell over her left eye.
Hailey sighed and looked around the tree house. "I think we can both guess what's coming tonight."
Adrienne smiled lightly remembering the past two nights they had had with AJ and Chris. "Yes I do believe we can expect them once again," Adrienne said and as she did so a soft wind blew through the tree house. Hailey shuddered.
Adrienne spoke "I guess we should probably get some sleep."
Hailey nodded, she had been very tired these last few nights and with the funeral the next day, she knew she would need her rest. Slowly both girls slid under their sheets once more and Adrienne switched off the red flash light sending them into darkness.
***
"Should we wake them? I mean, they look so peaceful when they're sleeping," Chris said.
Hailey groaned slightly. "Chris," she whispered. He smiled and laughed out loud waking Adrienne as well.
"Hello boys," Adrienne said sitting up and smiling to them both.
AJ nodded a hello to Adrienne and Chris smiled to her brightly. "Your turn Hailey!"
"Hello boys.," Hailey muttered opening her eyes to see Chris right in front of her face.
"Woah!" Chris said coughing and falling over. "Breath mints please woman goodness!" He laughed happily as Hailey took the pillow from under her head and hit him with it. "Oh I'm only playing Hailey."
Adrienne laughed smoothly, happy to be having a fun time with Chris and AJ again. AJ rolled his eyes at both Hailey and Chris. "Oh grow up would you?"
"And how do you suppose I do that?" Chris asked peering up at AJ.
"Point taken," AJ said before smiling lightly and sitting on the floor beside Adrienne.
"When are you going to tell her?" Adrienne muttered to AJ who looked at her with surprise.
"Tell her what?"
"When are you going to tell Hailey that this is the last time you guys are going to come and see us?" Adrienne asked him turning her head, her eyes filling with tears.
"How'd you know?" AJ asked her.
"I'm not an idiot. Yesterday, when you said we've reached two out of three truths I knew that meant we had one more. Also, Chris's funeral is tomorrow. I think it might be hard for both of you to come back when your buried. I know you can right now, but I notice your light is darker then Chris's. Its because your buried already isn't it?"
"Your very smart," AJ complimented. "You also just figured out the third truth, Acceptance."
Adrienne nodded slowly before tears fell from her eyes. "I'm really gonna miss you guys," she peered over at Hailey who was now having a pillow fight with Chris. "She will too."
AJ watched Chris and Hailey, smiling. "I know. Chris is having trouble adjusting. I think he's glad I'm with him so it's not to hard for him. And, always be with Hailey, promise me that. We'll always be watching over you guys. She's going to need someone. Always be with her. By the way, can you name this tree house Calesadrese? I know we were all planning to give it a name but never got around to it. We met a woman who is also, you know, dead who's last name was Calesadrese. We thought it might be nice to have her name honored." [To anyone who has made it this far. I just wanted to make a little side note that this is the point at which I read and myself started crying. R.I.P. Maya.]
Adrienne nodded and looked at AJ, taking in all his features. Slowly, she reached out her hand once more and felt his cheek. "I will always be with her. Don't worry."
AJ smiled and nodded as more tears ran down Adrienne's face. He stood, Chris spotted him standing and slowly dropped his pillow to the floor. Hailey didn't notice that Chris had dropped his pillow and continued hitting him for a moment before looking at him. "Why'd you stop?"
"Its time," AJ said to Chris who slowly nodded. Chris looked into Hailey's eyes and swallowed finding the words he needed harder then ever. "This is the last night we're going to be able to come and see you guys."
Hailey looked at Chris for a moment before tears filled her eyes and she shook her head violently. "No, no, no! You can't do this to me! Not again, don't leave me again! You can't!" Hailey sobbed and hid her face in her hands. Chris touched her back but Hailey jerked away.
"I'm sorry Hailey," AJ said from above her. "You must accept Hailey. Accept that we are in a better place and are leaving tonight for a final time."
Hailey continued to sob and Chris looked up at AJ. "Can't we do something?" He said him desperately. AJ shook his head.
"She must accept that we are leaving," he said quietly though it pained him to say the words, "I'm sorry."
Adrienne sat in the corner, unable to move or make a sound. She just sat staring at Hailey before slowly, as tears ran down her face. Slowly, from out of no where a soft laugh came from her lips. It wasn't a strong at first and she kept having to stop to swallow to keep it from erupting but still it came. Adrienne continued laughing, AJ looked down at her and nodded once, realizing what she was doing. He too started laughing. Chris looked at the two as if they were crazy for a moment before he started laughing as well. Three laugh's erupted the silence of the forest as they all stared desperately at Hailey who was still crying. Hailey heard the laughs, but continued crying. In a few minutes though, she slowly raised her head to them all and a smile came to her face through her tears as she realized what they were doing. She couldn't resist, she herself started laughing as well and for the next few minutes all four of them were laughing one final time together.
Adrienne and Hailey both watched as slowly AJ and Chris's laugh seemed to fade as did there bodies. Hailey and Adrienne fell silent as there friends left them. Everything around them was silent and still. Suddenly, "Thump." Hitting the floor in one big bounce was the lime green bouncy ball that Chris had taken the night before. Adrienne smiled and picked it up. She gently placed it in between herself and Hailey as they both laid there heads down and fell asleep once more.
"You beleive that there is one God. Good! Even the demons believe that-and shudder."

                      -James 2:19

heyyy. greeeeeeat post in the court one!! -Ginny (A Classic just complimented me!)