Tell me if this Rp is good please.

[drewskit]

Name:  Niles Slughorn
Nick Name: Silver Back
AGE:  21
Height 5"8
Appearance: Dirty blond hair, green eyes, small nose, small muscular structure, black robe, has the dark mark, fake smile.   
RACE:  Were Wolf, Death Eater
Parents: Mark Slughorn, Mary Slughorn
Personality: Lets just say if you make him mad you will be eaten. Theres one way to make him happy and that giving him a fresh kikd.
Likes: Eating people, and serving the dark lord.
Dislikes: Harry Potter, Dumbledor, and hates eating old people.
Power: To turn into a Were Wolf at a full moon.
History: He was bittin at the age of 5. His mom and dad disincluded him because of his curse. Killed his mom and dad and lived in the wild. Grey Back gave him shelter and introduced him to Voldemort. Voldemort liked him and gave him taskes that Niles or silver back (prefers Silver Back) did with no problem. Voldemort gave him the dark mark.

[I loves YOUz]

wow... um you like eating people.. intresting...

[drewskit]

lol, Im a Werewolf. 

[I loves YOUz]

okay... I bit.. hehe I'm a vampire!! XP

[drewskit]

Well you see, we have something in comman.  ;)

[I loves YOUz]

lol nice...

[drewskit]

But I worn you I have the dark mark as I read, but I hope we could still be friends :)

[I loves YOUz]

Maybe... after I'm done being mean... hehe  ;D

[malfoy_luv14]

YES! (andrew) this is very dope! hehe I LOVE U BRO!  :-*  ;D

[I loves YOUz]

Your related? kewl kewl

[drewskit]

ya my anoying sister, lol.

[I loves YOUz]

I have a sister but shes older then me... and an awesome person... kinda... somtimes

[drewskit]

Ya like my brother Joey hes a punk! sometimes :) ;)

[I loves YOUz]

I have a brother his name is Kerric... but we call him Tony... hes pretty awesome... sometimes... when hes not a freakin pain... hehe

[malfoy_luv14]

lol. and im not the annoying one, he is!  :-\
I guess we are both annoying at times.