The Wolves

[Lola_La_Fringe7]

I refuse to post until I get actual opinions on my story.  Not just the demanding wants.

[I loves YOUz]

I think it is very good and that you have good writing skills!

[fudge0604]

I like it, and I agree that you have good writing skills.
i like the story despite it's not my type of thingy.

BUMP!

[I loves YOUz]

*cough* thingy *uncough*

[fudge0604]

Oh! Crap! That came out a little wrong...

hehe....

[Lola_La_Fringe7]

MIsty was running across the clearing straight to Rain, the healer's den.  She pushed her way through the pine branches that blocked the entrance, and entered the dimly lit den.  She could see a figure laying down in the corner, and Rain was bent over it pressing something to its leg.  "Hello?  Rain?  Is Sky here?"  Misty asked, already knowing the answer.

Rain jumped up and whirled around.  "Don't ever sneak up on me like that in my own den!"  She growled.  "And yes your little friend is here.  Who else would I be treating?" But before Rain could finish her remark Misty was padding across the den. 

"Sky, I'm so sorry."  Said Misty apologetically.

"S-sorry for what?" Sky muttered, his eyes fluttering.

"If I hadn't stopped and been afraid of just getting my paws wet, then you wouldn't have been sent out to look for me."  Misty said looking downcast

"Its alright, I'll heal..."  Sky murmered closing his eyes.  Then a harsh voice cut into their conversation.  "But he won't get enough sleep with you in here!  Now go do some hunting or whatever you do!"  Snapped Rain, shooing Misty out of the den.  Misty sniffed in frustration as she padded back to the prey hunter's den.  She past River and lay down for a wuick nap.

[fudge0604]

I like it! Me is wanting more.

[I loves YOUz]

He might like it... but I luff it!! lol

[dobby888]

That's so good! I love it! Please write more!