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The Locket... >.<

Started by Lola_La_Fringe7, November 11, 2008, 11:38:43 AM

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dobby888

Oh! I love it! I bet Seth is gonna pop out of the woods and be all like, "KISS ME YOU FOOL!"

nate

you should write more! its really good and it keeps on wanting me to read more so you should really write more haha
i dont suffer from insanity...i enjoy every minute of it

Lola_La_Fringe7

Quote from: dobby888 on November 30, 2008, 12:59:06 AM
Oh! I love it! I bet Seth is gonna pop out of the woods and be all like, "KISS ME YOU FOOL!"

OMG *fall out of chair!* Lol! I dunno, i might change that part now... lol jk
Learn to love life, and you will find there is so much more to love.

dobby888

lol haha I knew it!!!!!! You are so predictable!

Lola_La_Fringe7

Actually you seriously didn't get it right... so ha!
Learn to love life, and you will find there is so much more to love.

dobby888

MEH! Well that's what you SHOULD have done!!!!!!!!

potter_fan122

"Get out of my way! I'm a free spirit!"
FOREVER WILL NEVER BE LONG ENOUGH.
"And now I understand a phrase I once thought odd;
I guess to love another person is to see the face of God."

Lola_La_Fringe7

She couldn't believe her eyes. Then she fell to the ground with a thump and fainted in shock.

She awoke with her head in someone's lap, hands running over her hair.  She gazed up meeting his eyes and her mouth dropped open with a pop, finally seeing his perfect features again. "Now don't you faint on me again." He teased, laughing the tiniest bit. "But before you do anything, here." He said, holding out a brush. "You might want to quick wash up."

Jackie blushed, remembering her appearance. She hurried to the river and splashed her face with water, tugging the brush through her hair. Then she washed her hands and arms, before running back and sitting pretty much on his lap.

She smiled faintly and took his hand, holding it tight, wanting him to never go away. He bent over and softly kissed her forehead.  She closed her eyes and smiled again. "Wait... How... No why did you find me?" She asked, suddenly coming to a recall this wasn't a dream.

He frowned and his brow puckered as he looked hurt. "Did you want me to not come?" He asked.

"No! Stay!" She said, almost shouting it. "I didn't mean that... But did you find my note?" She asked precariously. He nodded. "I did. But I wasn't going to let you come out here alone."

She shook her head. "You should have." She replied, sorrow filling her tone.

He half smiled, "I am curious as to what is in your pocket though. May I?" He asked arching a perfect eyebrow.

She shook her head. "Now is not the time, but I do have a question for you." She said. "Have you ever wanted to do just one thing, really badly?" She asked.

He blinked in surprise at the subject change. "Um... I suppose so, have you?" He said, smiling when she nodded. "May I ask what that is?" He asked again. He frowned when she shook her head. "How about I show you?" She suggested smiling. "Close your eyes." She said playfully, waiting until he closed them.

Then Jackie leaned in and pressed her lips to his softly, an almost electric feeling shooting through her body. Her arms wrapped around his neck and she kissed him again. She pulled away smiling as his eyes popped open. "Wow." He mouthed. She smiled and a high pealing laugh escaped her lips.

He pulled her against his chest and held her tightly. "That is what you've always wanted to do?" He asked raising his eyebrows.

She nodded, still smiling like a little girl.  She leaned in again, but jumped up when noises like shouting erupted further back in the forest. "Oh no." She gasped jumping to her feet. "They're coming." She mouthed, her eyes going wide with terror. Tears began to slink down her face. Tears of anger and fear, anger because she had dragged the only person she knew she couldn't live without into this.
"No! No! NO!" She shouted. Then she turned to him still somewhat crying. The only thing on her mind now was getting him out of here alive.

She took his hand. "Go! You have to go now! Meet up with me later! I can't put you in danger!" She shouted, sobbing now. He shook his head, pain showing in his eyes. "I can't leave you..." But Jackie turned his body and pushed him in the opposite direction, not giving him much of a chance to fight back. "No please go!" She pleaded, begging.

His eyes closed. "No... I won't, can't leave you here." He said, his voice soft and low. Jackie looked around frantically, she couldn't make him trapped too. Her mind came to a decision that took a second or so to put into action. "No, go! Leave! I don't want you here! Go away! Just go away! I don't love you! I never will!" She yelled, trying to put truh behind her words.

"I will never love you! I love... Seth! Can't you see that?! You're making this so hard! Pleas, just go!" She shouted, sobbing hysterically now. The words, though untrue in so many ways, did their job and his face showed disbelief.

The air could be cut with a knife, the tension was so thick. "I-if that's what you want..." He finally stuttered, pain cracking his voice somewhat in the middle. "Yes, now go away! I never want to see you again!" She shouted, watching him. Then he turned and ran into the forest without another word.

(Heres a long one! So um... don't expect a ton soon. If you can't tell I was sort of mad when I wrote the last part... My stories change with my mood!)
Learn to love life, and you will find there is so much more to love.

potter_fan122

"Get out of my way! I'm a free spirit!"
FOREVER WILL NEVER BE LONG ENOUGH.
"And now I understand a phrase I once thought odd;
I guess to love another person is to see the face of God."

Lola_La_Fringe7

sometimes i swear you guys are idiots... its not seth.   :P lol

Quote"I will never love you! I love... Seth! Can't you see that?! You're making this so hard! Pleas, just go!" She shouted, sobbing hysterically now. The words, though untrue in so many ways, did their job and his face showed disbelief.

Saying that she loves Seth is obviously hurting the person she's talking to; thus, that person is not seth...
Learn to love life, and you will find there is so much more to love.

potter_fan122

Oops, my bad. Tehe. Poor Nate. ((Who else could it be?!?!))
"Get out of my way! I'm a free spirit!"
FOREVER WILL NEVER BE LONG ENOUGH.
"And now I understand a phrase I once thought odd;
I guess to love another person is to see the face of God."

Lola_La_Fringe7

Hehe you will never know who it is! Until like the ending paragraph of the story,
Learn to love life, and you will find there is so much more to love.

dobby888

So if it's not Nate... who is it?  I love it! More please!

nate

keep going and never stop typing! i want to read the last paragraph  :P
i dont suffer from insanity...i enjoy every minute of it

Lola_La_Fringe7

As soon as he was gone she sank to the ground. Let them have me. She thought. What's the point in defying them anymore? I've already completely destroyed my life. She kept thinking, tears streaming down her face. Then a pair of hands closed over her eyes and something covered her mouth, but she put up no fight.  Her will was broken along with her heart, and the two were one and the same; thus, a being could not exist without either.

A few hours of trudging through the very woods from which she came, and she found herself back in a cell. Right where she had started. The hopelessness found her at once as she curled up on the lifeless floor. Then she remembered she hadn't eaten in days, but she didn't care. She would rather starve to death than live without him.

She sat on the floor wishing away the hours, unable to sleep. Her eyes drooped and she stared at the wall. She wished she had some water to wash up in, and the thirst was burning like an inferno in her throat, but she did nothing to quench it.  She heard the occasional bustling of people in the hallway, but only a few stop at her door. They always just poke their head in to see if she's still alive. Every now and then they threw in a package of blood.

It was the kind you got at blood drives, all packaged, but Jackie pushed them to a corner of the room and ignored them, willing herself into nonexistence. One day the head didn't stop at the door, it came all the way in. It was the killer again. 

He stopped and looked at Jackie in surprise. "Hmm... Miss, Dawn?" He asked, using her fake name. Jackie sighed, deciding that if she was giving up, she may as well do it thoroughly. "No... Its Jackie, my name is Jackie." She said, looking at the floor.

The man took her chin and turned it toward him. "Well, then... If we're being formal now, my name is Onde. Strange, isn't it? It is supposed to mean evil in another language. Fitting isn't it?" He asked, expecting a snappy response, but Jackie just shrugged her shoulders and let her chin fall from his hand.

"Quite timid are we?" He asked. "Maybe if I brought a certain person into this it would change your view on the subject?" He sneered evilly, snapping his fingers. A small video player was pushed into the room by unseen hands and he pushed the play button.

Jackie looked up to see another room like hers, but it was empty. Or at least it was until a figure paced onto the screen. The figure looked like the person she just met in the forest.... She jumped up and screamed. "NO!" Then she was across the cage, as fast as she could, anger lending to her adrenaline.

"LET HIM OUT! He didn't do anything!" She screamed, grabbing Onde's throat and pinning him against the wall. "Let. Him. Out." She hissed in his ear before letting him drop to the floor.

Onde got up smiling. "Now, don't do anything mean or your little boyfriend might get hurt." He warned, shaking a long spindly finger. Jackie's eyes went wide. "No." She whispered. "No!" She screamed, punching Onde as hard as she could, but Onde just smiled and pressed a tiny button on a control he pulled from his pocket.

The TV screen went fuzzy and a yell of pain was heard from the other room. "Stop!" She said, dropping to the floor. "Please." She pleaded hysterically as the yells continued. "I'll do whatever you want..." She surrendered, and just as she did the yelling stopped. She saw him through the TV lying on the floor of the cell.

She sobbed and held her head in her hands. "My fault, my fault." She babbled into her hands. Her face was pained and drawn as she babbled on. Onde stood above her, he knew he had won. He knew it. Even if she didn't know that was all just a recording. That wasn't really him. He was off in some godforsaken forest somewhere for all Onde cared, but all that mattered was that Jackie thought he was here.

((gosh! happy?))
Learn to love life, and you will find there is so much more to love.