The year of darkness Year Five

[Evil_To_The_Max]

The main character is not kiara's max,its me....I'm not mean,I'm not terribly evil,either.(okay,maybe just a little bit LOL)okay,here it is.MY STORY*drum rolls*(LOL sorry ron...I had to do that)

[size=56]The year of darkness(Year five[/size]

Chapter one(no name,ending of fifth year) :
Max Ran as far away from the hogwarts ground as he could,He didn't know how long he had been running,nor did he care.He didn't want to leave his old life behind,But their was no other choice.He wanted to forget all that had happened that year.Scenes played back in his mind,like an old movie.The day Malfoy had warned him to stay away from Kiara.The day he had befriended Kiara.The day he won kiaras effection,and finaly the day Kiara had gone to the darke side.He wasn't running beacuse they had all been bad memories,He was running because it had been his fault that kiara had gone to the dark side.In order to understand why it was his fault,we must go back in time.I must warn you that this story is not for the faint of heart,nor the closed of mind.

[Kiara Johnson]

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[_Lavender_]

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[Evil_To_The_Max]

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Chapter two::When she caught his eye


Max lay in his compartment with his best friends,sleeping.Corey prodded  him awake.Max snorted and opened his eyes."Whats up Cor?"He said tiredly.Corey hit him in the head and said loudly,"I'm sorry are you tired?Well dopey--I mean sleepy,Its time to change into our school uniforms."max laughed,and poked corey back."Thanks,dumb-dumb.."They both laughed this time.Max put on his magically(he had been practicing the spell all last year),and sat down when they were all done.

Sorry this part i posted is so short,This is not the end of the chapter,just get more people to read and post.

[Kiara Johnson]

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[Evil_To_The_Max]

could you get more ppl to reply and read?

[Kiara Johnson]

you betcheroonies I can.  lol

[Evil_To_The_Max]

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[Kiara Johnson]

(Lol, ya)

[Lily_Evans]

please continue!

[Twisted Lemon Sher]

ya i love it

[Evil_To_The_Max]

well...MY EVIL PLAN IS WORKING!!!YOU WILL ALL BE HYPNOTIsed! BY MY STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!! :devil: Ha ha!!scared you didn't I?LOL

Chapter two:continued

"So,Max,What Mischeif do you have planned for this year?"said Dan,quizzicly.Max laughed evily."All sorts my friend,all sorts." "wanna play exploding snap,anyone?"asked Kofi."I'm up for that."Corey said excitetly."me to."Max added,smiling at his friends brilliance.they played until there were no cards left to play with.pretty soon,the train speed to a stop.Max was sleeping,once again.His friends decided it was better not to test Max's sense of humor today.They might wake up the next day,Finding that they have an extra eye.Or worse.Max woke up,a few seconds later finding that all his friends were gone.he got up,and left the compartment.He accidently bumped into a girl."um...I'm sorry..." "It's fine."she said straring at max.He looked behind the girl and saw that draco malfoy,was right behind her picking on some one."um exuse me." He smacked malfoy in the head.Malfoy used the same old sneer,as if that would scare max away.Max turned around."I'm not scared of you,or your chronies." He noticed that the girl was staring at him,as though she was interested in what he had to say. he also noted that the girls hand was laced in malfoys.He thought to himself:She's to good  for him. then he turned around,and walked off the train.The Girl stared at Max walking away for quite some time then said "who is he?" "Just forget about him,he's no good." "okay,If you say so."they then walked off the train. Malfoy bumped into max and said so no one else could hear,"stay away from her,she's mine."max rolled his eyes and walked off toward the castle.

[Kiara Johnson]

ooooo, cool.  BUMP!!!

[.:isis:.]

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i love your story! pleez post more!!! :D

[brian]

I'm not gonna say bump. Because I ain't shakin s~$## !