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[AndySkater]

How did he save you.

[journal415]

How did he save you.

I was like giving-up on my story and he just came and said it was good...

[journal415]

Chapter Five: Fair Council Boulivard (FCBoulivard)
"Where are we going, mom?" Elice asked. "Well, here we are." Mrs. Green answered. "A bar?............a nasty old bar?" Elice said, surprised. Mrs. Green got to the door and there they saw women with short hair and men with long hair. "Mom?" Elice asked. "Yes, dear?" Mrs. Green said. "Are you sure we're at the right place? People are creepy here." Elice whispered to her mom's left ear. "Don't worry Elice. These are only illusions, they're not real. They're used to scare off Orderies." Mrs. Green explained, as she got a big, rusty, old key from her pocket. They went to the bar-table and went to this big, rusty, old chair which had a key hole. Mrs. Green inserted the big, rusty, old key to the big, rusty, old chair. "Oh my!" Elice said in amazement, as she saw both the key and chair turned gold! Mrs. Green reached for a quite long stick, colored blue (wand) and said, "Itrrusprotanus y gerfa!" The golden chair turned to a big golden door to the 'magical world'. "Welcome to the Fair Council. No Orderies allowed, please." read Mrs. Green a note from the door and then, opened it (the door). There inside were tiny flying faries to fairies with long gowns and tiaras, small gnome-like elves to human-like elves and alot of other fantasy creatures. "This is the 'Magical World'?" Elice asked. "Yes and no, again. Yes it is the ,so you call, 'Magical World'. And no 'cause it's called the 'Fair Council', not the "Magical World'." Mrs. Green explained. "What are we going to do first?" Elice asked. "First, we go to the Fair Council Bank or FCB. There we get FCB money or Fairy Cash or Bucks. Second, we go to the Fair Council Book Buys or FCB4. There, we buy what you need for Oxcinese. Third, we go to Fair Council Beefs and other treats or FCB3. Fourth, at last, we go to the Fair Council Books or FCB2." Mrs. Green said, as she and Elice walked there way to the Fair Council Bank (FCB). "It is very big here, at the 'Fair Council'." Elice commented. "Fair Council Boulivard. The Fair Council is all around the world and, in Asia, it's called the Fair Council Boulivard or, FCB." Mrs. Green explained. Elice, then, saw a big door infront of her. It was the FCBank door. "It's, HUGE." Elice said. "How do you think Giants will fit in a human-saized door?" Mrs. Green said as she and Elice opened the smaller door, beside it. Inside were alot of Giants. ALOT! 'Thumb, thumb, thumb.' Giants' footsteps were making a big shake, almost like an earthquake. "Why..?..." Elice said but before she can even finish, "FCBank needs Giants to keep the place organized. You see, Giants are really nice, gentle creatures. Not all, maybe but, the volts are up there, way, way, up there. So, well, Giants can reach them." Mrs. Green explained. "Duh!" Elice said.

[cutie]

it's sooooooo cool!
put more.

[journal415]

I'm goin' to have my final exams, next week, and I won't be able to post more, here. I'm goin' to review to pass 'em and go try to go to a BIG highschool. I hope I would pass the Phillipine Scienece High School or at leat the Quezon City Science High School. (Quezon City is a city in the Phillipine's capital.)

Wish me luck!

[_Lavender_]

Good Luckeroo! ;D

[journal415]

Chapter Six:FCBank
Mrs. Green held Elice's hand and went to a Fairy. "Hello, Kassy! Nice to see you again." said Mrs. Green as the tiny, flying fairy looked at her. "Oh my Diata! Is it really you, Eilleen?" the fairy/Kassy, said. "Yes it is!"Mrs. Green said. "Oh, is that your daughter? She looks very much like you. And look, she's a new kid from the block,too. So is my little, Carly." Kassy said. "Ca-carly?" asked Elice to Mrs. Kassy. "Yes, Carly. Carly Beth Anne Theresa Mae......." Mrs. Carly said but, "C. Carlos?" Elice inturupted. "Yes, that's her Orderie father's last name." Mrs. Kassy said, surprised. "Do you know her?" she, added. "She's my Orderie schoolmate." Elice explained. "Well then, you'll be great friends like I and Kassy." Mrs. Green said as Mrs. Kassy waved good-by, and the two, parted. "Oh, too bad, I didn't see Carly." Elice said to her mother. "Carly probably isn't with Kassy, now. Let's just try to bump into them, later." Mrs. Green said while they went to the teribbly small for his size, Giant. "Hello, I'm Molly, and welcome to FCBank. How may I help you?" she (the Giant) said. "We would like to withdraw 6,000 FCB money." said Mrs. Green. "May I please see your wand?" said Molly, the giant. Mrs. Green then gave her blue wand and Molly put it in a rock-carved, cave-like, small box. The box lit-up a green beam of light and several pieces of coin-shaped fine glass appeared, in a small transparent bag, near the box. "Thank you ma'm, please come again." said Molly, smiling. After a while, still in FCBank, "What are the Giants and volts way up there for if it just appears?" Elice asked. "If you're going to deposit, it's going to take an Orderie day, for that. Now, no more questions. We have shopping to do." Mrs. Green said.

[Kiara Johnson]

 :)  good

[journal415]

THANKS!
2 all dos hu read the story.
Is it really, well, good? 'Coz I'm really starting to think it's corny. Ac2ally it is corny isn't it?

Thanks for your either good or bad comments 'bout it!

I love moving stuff!

[Kiara Johnson]

lol, I like moving colored stuff.
No, I must dissagree.  No work of literature is ever corny.  Everything is worth writing down to share with others.  I believe your staory is indeed good.  It is raw and that is a good thing as well.