[u]My[/u]first fan fic:Harry Potter meets barry trotter and kills him!!muhahaha

[Kiara Johnson]

Wait .... I'l check .... Oh, and did you read mine????  lol  please continue

[Kiara Johnson]

oh, and that was a yes, I did read.  :) :) ;) :)

[ronweazley122]

which one lol i'll try....eventually...

[Kiara Johnson]

Kiara's Time -- lol -- The actual name for the story us Shadow of the Dark Lord.  

[ronweazley122]

oh...i will read...

[Kiara Johnson]

Hello, Hello, anything else fer me ta read?  lol Just joking with ya.  Wouldn't want you ta feel preasured or anything.  lol ;D

[AcId_BrOoZ]

BUMP!!

[ronweazley122]

at last!I have inspiration!ha...actually i found a piece of paper with a already written chapter on it...LOL okay,here it is...*drum roll*
The moment you've all been waiting for.....*drum roll continues*the...should i keep drawing tension up?LOL
*drum roll slows down and begings to stop*[size=30]THE NEXT CHAPTER!!![/size]
okay one more.MEETING EMILY
Later that day,They were all getting ready to go to diagon alley.Hermione scrurried around hurriedly,looking for her list.As they gathered around the fire place,harry muttered distractredly,"say it more clearly..."Mrs.weasley counted all of them,took some flew powder,and threw it in the fire,which immediatly turned green.Hermione who had never traveled by flew powder looked at the fire opened mouthed and said,

"OOOOO.....I've read about this,but I've never actually done it before,though...."Mrs.Weasley smiled,looked at her enthuasiasticly and said,

"Would you like to go first dear?" hermione,shuffled on the spot nervously,and spoke shakily,

"m-me?why can't I go last?"Mrs.weasley looked dissapointed and said in a similar voice,

"okay dear."

[brian]

Good beginning, but you should write more

[ronweazley122]

Umm....its not the begginning,might wanna look back more....the reast of  my story is all back.

[brian]

I mean for chapter

[ronweazley122]

OIC,sorry for the misunderstanding.

[brian]

cointinue?

[_Lavender_]

that is a crude name for your title.

[ronweazley122]

*scowls*I was younger when I made this.I'm sorry if it doesn't meet your standards! :P The title is only a title,as in other books,in this story,you can't judge a book by its cover...AND...If you haven't even read...,MY story,THEN DON'T complain about the title.thankyou and goodnight,dear critic.And if you have read it.I can't change the title.Believe me when i say,The story is much better then the title.